Oh gosh, this was so sad. It made me crryyyyy.

I did enjoy the thought though that Peggy raised her niece. Hehe, that was a cute little addition.

My constructive criticism here would be: Add more detail. You said he sighed deeply then the tears started rolling. Was there some moment in between there when his eyes got misty first, and some further, lingering emotions, then suddenly the wall breaks and they all spill forth? And you had him sitting there at her grave, but I did not see mentioned him actually taking the seat. Maybe something about all the emotions running wild, making him tired or his knees feel weak, so for fear of toppling over he decides to park it. Or something.

That said, I thought you did a very good job with the emotions. Well done.

hey, this was a really nice story. I was so unsettled after seeing Capt. America, and this really just helped me put the movie to rest in my brain.

Thanks!

Aw :')