That's pretty cute. I was expecting more, and was kind of peeved when it ended. I guess I didn't see that it was a one shot;) I liked it though; it was very realistic.

That was very tougching- finally, a Newsies story with morals. :-)

Good, now how can I stop saying New Yoik?, I just saw the movie. Hehehehehehehe good job G.R.

that was really sweet! goes to show what you can do for someone without alot of trouble for yourself. anyway... ya, it was good!

::lifts head slightly, broad smile beaming across face:: Its about time. I'm glad to know that its not the total site that has reduced to a filthe riddled with stench of slash/sex. Thank you very much. ::smiles:: I wish there were more writers here like you...

Top quality writing.. and great plot. ::smiles:: I hope you continue to post similar things... I'll read and review them (and I know many others that will too). ~ Letoile

Awww... how cute is that? Nicely done.

That was really good! And it had a moral too, how original. Of course, I have real trouble imagining Race crying, but that's my problem. So, write some more stories . . . please!