| Reviews for The Garter |
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ColonelJayWrites chapter 51 . 6/16 Amazing as always. You never fail to make us smile. Thank you for this wild ride. I'll be honest, before this, I didn't ship ChellDOS much, although I'm starting to reconsider. :3 |
ColonelJayWrites chapter 22 . 6/16 ... Is Mr Chubby Beak dead?I'm in tears right now, for GLaDOS and Chell. But also Chubby Beak. Rest in peace. |
Guest chapter 51 . 2/27 Ok so it got better, and I'm so glad. Chell loves GLaDOS, GLaDOS loves Chell, I can finally go to bed lol. Great story, I'm happy Chell finally stood up for GLaDOS too a few chaptors ago. Also I was so relieved you wrote in that GLaDOS couldnt feel pain cuz she took out the testing core, because that scene was terrifying enough as it was. |
Guest chapter 37 . 2/27 Finally! This whole story has been incredibly painful to read, since all I could see was Chell using GLaDOS for sex, and using her euphoria against her to get her own way and to stop them from talking about their problems. It was sickening, especially after seeing what Black Mesa did to her and knowing how the scientists treated her. Im so glad GLaDOS finally called her out on it. It was painful watching her heart broken time and time again as Chell just kept showing GLaDOS that she didn't think of her as anything other than a machine to use and manipulate. I still don't like Chell in this story even though she's "sorry". I don't buy her story that she thought the sex made GLaDOS happy. All the times she told her "no" or "stop" wasn't clear? Anyway, it's a well written story but it's painfully sad and disturbing. I mean it doesn't make you a bad writer, you're an excellent writer and there are far more disturbing stories out there, like Steven King books. I can't stop reading cuz I just want to get to the part where things get better and I'm glad to see things may start to. I hope from here Chell is more considerate of GLaDOS's feelings. |
Kirlya chapter 19 . 4/14/2019 GOD I dislike humanity. FUCK. Can't I just run away with a computer instead. I gotta say, I'm a little pissed with how Chell handled everything. And I'm INCREDIBLY pissed at Ms Keegan. Nosy old bat. Hmf. And Farm Boy. Fuck off. ...I think you should know that you are my favourite author, btw, and that it's your ChellDOS work that got me into writing. Much love. |
Guest chapter 51 . 8/18/2018 I know this fanfic is pretty old by now and you're probably not gonna see this, but I just wanna say thank you. I'd recently found some Chelldos fanart that dragged me back into this ship much against my will, and I was itching for some more fanfic goodness of these two, which both your stories Strange Bedfellows and The Garter gave in droves. What I'm most impressed about was your ability to capture GLaDOS' voice so well; it was real authentic as far as I reckon. Your portrayal of Chell was also super adorable. All in all, it was a good time! So thank you again and bless you for this wonderful tale :) |
Truffalot chapter 51 . 6/14/2018 It seems that this ends with them together somehow but I can't force myself to read through them fucking other people, then GLaDOS denying she ever had feelings for her, then dying, then I'd assume Chell got raped after that. Seriously what is wrong with you? Why would you make a fic that is good and normal all the way through and then just do this? I had favorited your stories and you as an author etc because I liked it up until then and then? Seriously, fuck you |
Truffalot chapter 51 . 6/14/2018 So they both cheated on each other? Only Chell cheated on her and GLaDOS didn't? They both pretend nothing happened? GLaDOS is killed and says she loves her when she dies? Wtf is wrong with you? Did you set out to make a good fic just to fuck everyone who read it over? Nobody should read this. Ever. |
Truffalot chapter 44 . 6/14/2018 I'm further in the chapter now. Really? Fukin really? That is so OOC, so unpleasant to read and so stupid |
Truffalot chapter 44 . 6/14/2018 I'm just saying this from the beginning of the chapter: it was probably a scarecrow. This better go somewhere good because drama for the sake of drama sucks, but mix it together with one character "cheating" on the other and it's just frustrating and not pleasant to read |
Truffalot chapter 42 . 6/14/2018 Poor GLaDOS, Chell must not think that she can get horny |
Truffalot chapter 38 . 6/13/2018 Chell finally realises how inconsiderate of GLaDOS she was actually being. Interested to see what happens next |
Truffalot chapter 30 . 6/13/2018 Aaaw, how sweetI also now have an urge to hear a turret singing the alphabet aerobics rap |
Truffalot chapter 22 . 6/13/2018 I've enjoyed both fics but the past few chambers I've really disliked. It isn't angst, just drama for the sake of drama. GLaDOS' actions are so strange and stupid, not in the hurting her part but why she keeps going even after Chell says that what she is so angry about didn't happen? And how Chell didn't chase after her to begin with? There are so many other things that are just dumb happening the last few chapters that it leaves a bad taste in my mouth. To reiterate, make sure that you actually keep in mind the difference between angst and drama for the sake of drama. These past few chapters I'm probably just going to pretend it didn't happen/happened differently/for different reasons so that I can still try to enjoy the rest of the fic. The violence I had no issue with, it was the why that was the issue |
Rea chapter 51 . 3/21/2018 This has got to be the most bonkers fic I have read to date (along with Strange Bedfellows) and it was so much damn fun. But I gotta know Will Chell ever get any goddamn cake |