| Reviews for Pink ForgetMeNots |
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milkypandas chapter 1 . 3/25/2018 So lovely and true to their characters. The lemon was also nicely written without being overly explicit. |
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013 So great, loved this one-shot. This pairing is awesome :D |
Ai Mamoru chapter 1 . 4/19/2013 That was beautiful and sweet. I would have loved to see you making this into more than a oneshot. But it's great either way :) |
randomteenager chapter 1 . 1/20/2013 Aw, that was cute. I really like the way you wrote this. Lovely style and they were both in character, thank you! I loved the insecurity Zack felt, how he was almost a ghost of his former self. That was realistic and well done, it makes perfect sense he would feel that way considering what Hojo did to him and Cloud. It's sweet as always that Aerith is gentle and understanding of him. The only thing that got me was, wouldn't she be a bit miffed that Zack never replied to her letters? Yes she'd understand once he explained, but I thought she should have acknowledged that issue more. Either way, it was very cute, and I wish it ended like this :( I'm replaying Crisis Core right now and those two are so cute! What a tragedy :( The ending was cute as well! Good job my friend! :) |
aisacchan chapter 1 . 5/31/2012 It's good. Well done. Loved Zerith! |
AelsiaA chapter 1 . 2/22/2012 I love this! I wish it was more then a one shot but I love it anyway. Great story. |
Callout chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 I would like to give you my thanks. Ive been waiting for one of these for such a long time now. And you know what I kind of wanted it to be more than just another one-shot. But anyway. Good story. |
Harlequin chapter 1 . 12/17/2011 Thank you. Thank you thank you thank you. I needed to read a happy, steamy Zerith, and lo and behold, here was yours. The sex scene, the reunion, just about everything was perfect. I say 'just about' because I think they confessed and kissed (and maybe did more, I'm not sure) in CC. But I can see how them *not* confessing is vital to the story. Really good title, btw. Really caught my attention |
ladylite chapter 1 . 12/11/2011 Oh, my god. I love you. I do, I really do. I love you so much, that I had to peel my eyes away from this story and tell you. This, THIS STORY I have been craving for ever since I beat Crisis Core. I was like, shit... I hope someone on FF has written about Zack and Aerith.. and kept them OC... and somehow managed to leave Zack alive (cries, I wish he lived so badly, but it's okay. Him and Aerith are living it up in the Lifestream 3) all while keeping the story true to it's... well, original story. Your writing pose is perfect. No grammar mistakes and how to describe things is amazing. This feels like it's written by the creators of Final Fantasy, but better. You're freaking great. Everyone, read this fucking awesome story that filled the giant hole in my heart. You, are a wonderful writer. I owe you soo much for satifying my love for these two. 3 |
animevideogame freak chapter 1 . 11/29/2011 so adorable i loved it SQUEEEEEE! lol |
Low Woo Hoo chapter 1 . 11/23/2011 WooT! Got a little bit hot near the end there! ;) Anyways, a job-well done! (rereads it again and again and again...) |
yavati chapter 1 . 11/23/2011 A really nice story! You did a great job with it. Hope you'll write more! And keep up the good work! |
Squall.Is.The.Best chapter 1 . 11/23/2011 Yes! First new ZxA story in such a long time! DDD Thank you thank you for writing this! It's REALLY good! You should write more ZxA stories like this! ] |