Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
BaraKiryuHuntress chapter 8 . 6/5/2013
Sheesh! This had me tearing up!
Dark Goddess of Chaos chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
r u kidding me! i hate arwen! i would kill her myself!
Dark Goddess of Chaos chapter 9 . 1/22/2009
ur so cruel.
Omega4 chapter 9 . 5/11/2003
...cries...

Oh, the ANGST!

you are horrible, truly horrible, my dear. no more angst bunnies for you!
Chibi-chan v2.5 chapter 9 . 5/9/2003
Wonderfully done. I enjoyed it muchly!
girturtle chapter 9 . 2/22/2003
OMG this is one of the best stories i've read.! and I MEAN BEST!

On the last chapter i used half a box of Tissues!

and i'm not lying!
tineryn chapter 9 . 2/8/2003
very sweet. And, angsty as it was, I believe legolas made the right choice in leaving... poor arwen. heh, never thought I'd say THAT.

well done!

gwyn
Angelline chapter 9 . 1/6/2003
Wonderful story... but too sad. I personally like happy endings, but this was written with a lot of descriptions and feelings, that I decided to leave a review for you~ Happy belated New Year, and please go on writing wonderful stories.
littlegreenleaf chapter 9 . 11/21/2002
I have just now read your story. I'm not much of a cryer, but this one had me going! Your writing style is beautiful. And I love the way you write the spoken words of your characters. I will be reading more of your fics, absolutely! You are very gifted!Thanks for sharing!

Stephanie
Rae Shap chapter 9 . 10/31/2002
That was excellent! I wish I could write like that! It was so sad **wipes eyes**. But it was without a doubt the best... well... whatever you want to call it. I'll have to check out the rest of your portfolio now!
Ellwyn chapter 9 . 10/26/2002
Bravo! Your story is beautifully sculpted, just like the rest of your stories. When I first found out what a slash fic was, I did the equivalent of reeling away in horror. There is nothing wrong with the idea, just the fact that [most of them] are incredibly crass and most are written just for the sake of writing some very twisted scene, completely devoid of any sort of plot. But yours had a plot. Not so much the plot but the descriptions of the characters and their emotions, thoughts, that made it wonderful. Thanks for the great read.

P.S. I apologize for that Grey-Company Elvish thing. I suppose I am one of the instigators of that entire ordeal, since in my first fic I told many people to go to that site for easy translations-I didn't start it, but I certainly carried it on. :) I'm still indebted to you for having you correctly translate my elvish dialogue. Mucho gracias! Ochen spasibo (in Russian) Heehee. :)
Analia chapter 9 . 10/13/2002
*sniff* that was great.
Blacknoise chapter 9 . 10/10/2002
Briliant! Great work.

I especially love that you kept the dialogue Toklien-ish instead of using modern vernacular. Gives it a real "Lost tales of the Fellowship" feel to it. My commendations. I also liked your effective use of the love triangle. *applauds warmly*

Yay!
Emma the Lame chapter 9 . 10/6/2002
Oh how sad! Bitter sweet really. To have something like true love and then have to have it denied! Oh terrible. But your story was beautiful! Great job.
BalletRat chapter 9 . 10/5/2002
Beautiful ending, beautiful story. Well done.
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