Wow...just, wow. That was so amazing! I am very glad you decided to do the two-shot instead of the one. This was absolutely beautiful. I had just bought this book from my friend's recommendation a good month ago and adored it. I was thinking about it this morning and was curious if there was any fanfiction about it up on the site. This is the first one I read and I am glad. Thank you for the wonderful story

Just finished reading the book and I loved this! :)

Great story! Loved it 3 :)

Aww, this chapter was so sweet, please make another romance story about Owen's pv with romance and of course the pair has to be Annabel.

Finally there's point of view of Owen! I like it

I enjoyed this and think you did a great job with Owen:)

Well, this one was a bit longer, so you know, I saw a few more mistakes. Here are the ones I spotted:

'Girls, they're and enigma'

'He raped her mom' Erm, lol. What you need to do here (and if you fix nothing else, definiately do this one!) is to put a comma between 'her' and 'mom' and give the word mom a capital M. So it doesn't look like you're saying that Will Cash raped Annabel Greene's mum... XD It needs to be like this: 'He raped her, Mom.'

'atrocityattacked'

'For somuch'

And I think that's it... plus all the words in bold. There's nothing technically wrong with them, I just don't like them :D

Apart from those things, I liked this chapter too. Not as much as the other, but it was good! Well done :)

that was really sweet :) I loved it. Owen is so awesome... and he says it was bad that he punched Will, but really, i wouldn't have thought half as well of him if he hadn't ;)

One thing I would say, though: I'm not sure about that big bold EARTH in the middle. To have it in bold type looks rather un-professional, so if I were you, I'd change it.

But apart from that one thing, a great little ficlet!

:D

this is amazing (: keep writingg please!

Oh cool! You captured that scene in his perspective great! Can't wait for the second half (and more hopefully, because I can't get enough of Just Listen fics and there needs to be more to read!) Thanks for posting this :)