| Reviews for Phineas' First Dance |
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bluecatcinema chapter 1 . 8/11/2012 Very nice. Loved how you stayed true to the show's structure, with Perry and Doof's actions affecting the main story. |
AmyNChan chapter 1 . 5/19/2012 Phin is such a dork! *_* |
3354978 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011 In response to your summary: OF COURSE HE DOES HE'S PHINEAS. DUHHHHHH! Sorry, I just really hate stories that take place in their teenage years. Ignore me. :) |
Navi Junior chapter 1 . 12/1/2011 It's awesome(r) than cool. |
FeatherlightPI chapter 1 . 11/28/2011 Love it! Phinabella forever! |
Secret Agent G chapter 1 . 11/26/2011 XD That was really funny! I liked how Doofenshmirtz's Inator unknowingly worked for good, and how Baljeet, Buford, and Ferb all had a bet. XD I like your writing style, too. :) Great job! |
Shanar chapter 1 . 11/26/2011 Ah, yes, those mini cucumbers. |
GoodrosNemesis chapter 1 . 11/23/2011 What a great story! I always wonder what Perry would say to himself when he rolls his eyes. It's too bad the Say-What's-On-Your-Mind-inator didn't hit anybody else. That could have been really funny! |
WordNerb93 chapter 1 . 11/22/2011 Nice story here! Yes, it is cheesy, but in a good way! If I understood the story correctly, Phineas was zapped by the Say-What's On-Your-Mind-Inator and told Isabella what was on his mind, which was asking her to the dance. If so, Doof's invention actually did a lot of good! It's not too often that that happens. I hope you write some more stories soon! |
Friends for Food chapter 1 . 11/22/2011 Author's note: Gee whiz, this thing kinda stinks! I promise my other stories are much better. :) The story is still cute, but I'm noticing a lot of errors. I wrote this in the summer, when my brain was the consistency of melted jell-o (it should be about the same consistency as well-done meatloaf) and I was just not as smart as I am now, like five months later. But if you liked this one, you'll LOVE my other stuff, because it's significantly better! :D |
Galaxina-the-Seedrian chapter 1 . 11/22/2011 My word, are you NEW here? This is AWESOME! XD |