I really liked this!

Awesome. The way you depicted the inner conflicts... I don't think I've ever read something like this. Imagining the scene almost made me cry. Good job.

I wish there was more! It was really good. The changing POV added to the drama very nicely. Great job!

I loved this!

Good fic! Thank for this! I love it!

Bye!
BD

I love it! Thx for the fic :)

Beautiful.

Ohmigoodness this story was amazing! I loved it! So sweet and I loved how you showed their emotions I've all ways been interested in how Ikkaku and Yumi would feel and react if his secret got out and your version is most def one of my favs!

Peace, love, and cheese pizza

Crazy purple ninja

I've tried to think about what I was going to say about this story and all I've come up with is "Wow!"...all right I will be giving more reasons in a few seconds, but that WOW pretty much describs my basic feelings for this story. First though, I'd like to thank you again for translating this story for me. I truly appreciate it, more than you can know. Ok, now comes the part where I tell you in more detail why I liked this story.

1)The way you kept in-character with Ikkaku and Yumichika. I've read a lot of stories about these two and let me tell you, not everyone has succeeded in doing what you've done. I'm a big fan of Ikkaku and Yumichika's friendship, so I'm pretty strict about keeping them in-character.

2)The style of your writing. I'm not sure I can truly put into words what it is about your style that I like, I just like it. Yes, I know, it's annoying when someone tells you that they like your style of writing, but can't really say what it is. All I can say, is you have some spark in your writing that grabbed my attention and held it. If I could point out one thing it would be that fact that you go into what the characters are thinking/feeling. You get into their heads and show us why they would feel this way, instead of another. Great job!

All in all a great short story. Thank you again for translating it. Keep up the nice work.

~Tamuril2

P.S. Please don't take this the wrong way, but that kiss that Ikkaku and Yumichika did at the end...was it intended as a slash?

Gosh... I loved this! ...I keep trying to find something more meaningful to say, but all I can think of is "LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!" XD

I'm not going to joke, this story made me cry - IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL. I'm sure Yumichika was having a mental breakdown when he realised he cut his face, But the story was so sweet!

Keep Writing!

Ładny kawałek...Ciekawe podejście do więzi pomiędzy tymi dwoma unikalnymi bohaterami i co stałoby sie po odkryciu 'prawdziwego oblicza' Yumichiki. Bardzo mi sie podobało :)