More please

Holy crap this story is so good! I'm loving it, especially the intrinsic draw between Bella and Alice. Their passion and intensity is so yummy. I do so hope to see this continued.

Things are heating up a bit more. Was it Jasper that initially told the Volturi? What’s up with the black marks from the dead vampire? Hopefully if they do go against the Volturi, the twins also decide to help Bella. (Like maybe Chelsea and Corin had forged their bonds, or maybe they became disillusioned after a time, or guilty that they were the cause of their friend’s/parents’ death.)

Hopefully, if Jasper truly loves Alice, he’ll give her up, since she chooses Bella. Anyway, can’t wait to read more!

Update asap! Love this story!

You’re a great writer, this story is a good read and very interesting. I like what you’ve done with the characters and how you’ve shown their growth. Please don’t stop writing :)

I feel like a dick for saying this but I'd like to point out that vampires can run faster than any vehicle. At least the twilight ones can anyway. In the same breath though this is your story so my apologies. Great fic btw.

Hey dude, Olá

Caramba! Que enredo foda, sem palavras para tanta criatividade. Muito obrigada por nos apreciar com esse talento maravilhoso!
Espero que a Bella recupere seu lobo interior e tome as rédias da matilha, afinal de contas ela tem o sangue ela nasceu para liderar e o sangue não mente. Por ora vamos acompanhando o desenrolar dos eventos e tenho suspeitas que Jasper vai conspirar com os Volturi para atacar com toda força...
Enfim, estou ansiosa para a continuação e talvez seja deliciosamente surpreendida... Bom, veremos...

Uma grande e caloroso abraço,

Adcen from Brazil april 2020

Ps: Espero que você esteja, o melhor para você sempre

Ps2: Não desista da nossa matilha :,) (leitores)

Pleeeaaaase
It s one of the best and most interesting ones I've read!

Was browsing around and realized there had been an update to this story I missed! Was a pleasant surprise, and hope you come back to this at some point because you’ve got some great plot lines going!

:)

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

if you eat vanilla ice cream before you throw up it is less terrible, it cuts down on the burning

Please update this! It's so good

please continue please

Please continue please I really love this story please continue

why is the six century werewolf not more mature? she can't figure out how to let Alice know she was thinking about going to the police or getting a camera or something for the 'prowlers' because she saw footprints outside her house or something? And, now she is manipulated into hanging out with them and jumping off the cliff? how has she survived? and can you actually do a cannon ball from that high without at least massiv.e pain? and don't apologise for a dumb ass losing his temper for no reason, breaking his arm or something, probably Overkill, tripping him... seems about right.