That was a beautiful start to something I wished was a lot longer

This is excellent! I could feel the atmosphere as I was reading and I could picture everything that was happening.

Keep writing!

It has to be a Story! Please, make more!

This is brilliant! A sort of...sweet and simple vibe.

this is really nice. it's something refreshing :D

I love it, no romance just a 'friendly' talk. This is what i've been missing. I would love it if you'd write more in this style.

Light and good! :) Shame that it's a one-shot though.

I like the ending!

-Dianna xx

Great story! You're a good writer and I loved the story :) too bad there's not more :(