Awe that was beautiful

no words can describe how anazing this was! i am a little upset at how charlie forgave leah so quickly after hearing everything that she has done but i do ubderstand that he and bella are alike and are forgiving people

I just have to say this is the best one shot I have ever read. I loved the whole progression of the story, and how it was different than other imprint stories. The time it took for them to come together was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. I loved that Bella was a chef and enjoyed cooking that much. The ending made me laugh more than any other story has too, especially the whole Star Wars dialogue. You did an amazing job with this story. Thank you for having this idea and putting it to words.

Loved this but hate when Charlie pays for everyone else’s kids and somehow doesn’t pay for Bella. Then he doesn’t fix it later! Hate that!

Lol, cute ending

Love what Victoria said to Bella. I liked the plot but it lacked more intensity, Bella forgave everyone very quickly. It could have been more intense. I really liked the end

I LOVVVE PAUL/BELLA

I want to smack Leah. I mean Paul was an idiot too but Leah didn’t even last a month. A month! Just...grrrrr.

Love this story. Obi Wan LoVe it.

This story never gets old!

I love how you based Seth’s and Bella’s kids names off of some of the vampires from the original series! When I first read that paragraph, I almost choked!

AWWWWW that was so cute!

I usually don’t really like angst too much and Leah made me want to choke the life out of her. But in the end I loved the story and that they got to realize their dreams everyone and Leah was left in the dust even better lol

While Paul’s telling the story, Seth overhears Paul call him a ‘other wolf’ and slowly shows his face at the window whispering ‘fake bitch’ knowing Paul would hear him, before flipping him off and descending into the shadows

Loved this story. Thank you.