I liked how each of the knights had to figure out how to say "I'm sorry" and that it took time for it to be resolved.

Even though the Lamia had control, the reactions to the horror inflicted were real for all, and I'm glad it wasn't just sat aside and ignored.

Enjoyed how Merlin found some humor to deal with Percy and that Gwen mothered the boys into dealing with their guilt and shame.

Oh i love this story but idk i want to see more merlin reaction to the knights when after being beaten up and the knights were broken from enchantment and also arthur seeing merlin's dream (which i would like it to be more emotional and violent) BUT all in all a fantastic story and i am going to fav this.

MY MERTHUR HEART IS SCREAMONG ALSO STILL HVEN'T TURNED OFF CAPS LOCKKS

Wonderfully well written.

Good job

awww this was good
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Haha.
I love Gaius.

OOOOOOOOO GET CHEWED OUT YOU miserable knights that are making me miserable
i still love you guys go hug Merlin in a day or two .-;

o o f

holy cow

The Gwen/Merlin scene made me shed a tear (or two), and LOL why the hell Arthur's first reaction was wanting to poke Merlin ? that killed me ! xD xD

That was intense! I loved seeing Merlin show off his mercy and forgiveness. I'm really glad they made up in the end! Though, I wish there was another chapter where Gwaine gets curious as to why Merlin hadn't been affected by the Lamia when Merlin said that there was now record of a mortal man being able to resist the Lamia! I guess I'll just have to imagine that part. Thank you!

Lovely job!

Aw, I love protective!Arthur and Gwen, and the knight's little 'speeches' were just perfect in Chapter 5! Was kind of annoyed Merlin and Gwen hadn't gotten apologies in the show, though I imagine if they'd gotten even half as far as they did in this they'd have done so to no end when they found out.

Fantabulous. :)