| Reviews for Athlon, Chaos' Commander of the Universe |
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  ninjatwitchtv chapter 21 . 6/28 hi, how are ya |
| all about hope chapter 1 . 6/2 DOES ANYONE KNOW WHAT AN ORIGINAL PLOT IS ANYMORE? HOLY FREAKING CRAP. —all about hope |
| PBJellyBellies chapter 4 . 5/28 Isn’t Michael Yew... y’know... dead? |
 SlytherpuffGryffinclaw chapter 13 . 5/25 OMFG! Percy has a *SON!* |
| Sally chapter 9 . 5/10 There were 12 original cabins you forgot Ares Also posideons wife is Sally Jackson isn't it |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/9 This is amazing |
| anon chapter 30 . 4/30 anyone else here in 2020? lol, quarantine has really gotten to me and I came back to reread the story I was obsessed with in 2015... no regrets, however, and it's so funny to read this again and remember all the weird details that stuck in my head after all these years. minus the grammar, you're so creative and dedicated to making a good story with (minimal) loopholes. I'm really not trying to give a backhanded compliment because I know this was written literally 9 years ago. this one's memorable. no clue if you'll ever see this or if you've touched this website in years (I know that I have not), but I hope someday you'll read this:) |
| The Critique chapter 1 . 4/28 Try writing something original, and NOT PERCABETH. You realise how much it SUCKS, right? |
| Guest chapter 30 . 4/27 pls pls pls write it |
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/25 ... That made no sense. If Kronos had a device that could kill Percy why not use it and kill him ? Why would he go with such a convoluted plan instead ? |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/25 No really ? She was forced to ? Wow I would have never guess ! It was so subtle after all ! And what Percy's so called friends excuse ? Were they all "forced" to treat him like trash too ? No let me guess, they are going to say sorry and everything is going to be forgiven. I mean who wouldn't want to be friend with people who broke your years long friendship with them because of the lies of some random loser ? I mean, clearly it's the kind of people you should trust right ? Who would want any kind of loyalty or trust from his or her friends after all ? |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/25 Why would we feel anything for them ? Alright they regret what they did, it doesn't change the fact that they betrayed Percy on the words of someone they barely knew. With "friends" like that who need enemies ? |
| Niknaclol chapter 6 . 2/26 please learn how to shorten sentences, this is physically painful to read at times. you have much too many run ons |
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/16 This is horrible |
| wise girl chapter 24 . 2/5 i really like this story. i have never read some thing like this. it is so different from others. they write the same story but i have never read some thing same to this!. i luv this story |
