Love the tension.

This is do good. You are drawing me in. I live their internal angst.

Just discovered this, very sweet and a beautiful piece of writing. Nicely done!

Thank you so much for this terribly beautifully written story. What a treat to be able to read it in one go... It's so very thoughtful and seems to me written with so much care. I love it, so much really that I don't feel that I'm expressing in an all too well-spoken manner, but I hope that you can somehow read it between the lines... xox

that was very sweet. i very much liked it. the build-up was well done.

AAWESOOME! This was so cute! I loved it so much, I hope you find it in you to write another story like this one!

*swooning* What a wonderful ending. I'm so happy you've finished this one. It is so romantic, Charles is so romantic, still there's a lot of uncertainty too till the end because they're both scared, they both don't know if they're alone in their feelings, unaware how important they are for the other. And then they do. *sigh* This really is perfect.

"For years, he had been stuck on yesterday."

What a perfect sentence to describe Charles Carson and how perfectly did you solve their argument? I love this chapter so much! Read it twice last night. It's so romantic how they both approach each other step by step, letting go of all the walls they had built up for years.

I hope everything turns out fine for you too. Thanks so much for this update darling. take care! ((hug))

Perfection, thy name is Lovisa Cansino.

Im so glad youve finished it and the ending was absolutely perfect. So much emotion conveyed between them in a few words. It was quite the emotional roller-coaster, but Im glad hes managed to find his way back to her.

This was perfect, and I almost cried at the end. Happy, hot tears.

The way they are still so caught up in the past, while trying to reach out to the future, to each other... The pacing of this whole story was excellent, and the way you've kept them in character: perfect.

Now I feel inspired to write something, too... Thank you, dear, it was a wonderful read.

I'm the worst friend ever! I've been reading this for such a long time and never sent you a proper review, have I? You can smash my head later or aske me anything, sweetheart!

This WHOLE story was amazingly kind and sweet, really adorable with it light tone and OMG this just makes me imagine how the "next fic" *coughs* will be like!

You did it beautifully.

(ahhhhhhhhhhh foi lindo, maravilhoso e eu to aqui morrendo de inveja da Elsie pelo amor e devoção que Charles sente por ela e como ele conseguiu criar um momento tão doce entre eles apesar de enfiar os pés pelas mãos na hora de falar.)

When I am feeling less a puddle of happy goo, I will reread for typos and let you know.

But right now I am much too gooey to pay attention to such things.

"You mean a great deal to me, Elsie."

It seems such a simple sentence out of context, but within the story it was just amazing and so perfect and meant oh so much. This was just such a perfect ending and I am so glad you shared it with us!

I missed your writing! :)

This whole story was lovely, but especially this chapter. It's just so delicate and beautiful. It says so much while saying very little and I was just caught up in it completely, hooked on every word. So thank you so much for sharing and thank you even more so for finishing this, because it's so, so very lovely.

This is so beautifully written. So, so, so beautifully!