Aww, that last line was heartbreaking.

Though overall, beautiful drabble :)

ah hell, that was such a warm start and then the last line just freezes. i like what you did. ;) write on!

A nice little peek into Dean's life while Sam was at Stanford; very powerful and that last line was like a punch in the gut.

Fabulous job.

How do you always manage to leave me aching and heartsick for Dean?

Great drabble!

Ahhh, this is wonderfully ambiguous – easy and sexy in the beginning ... and so sad in the end. So very Dean. Awesome drabble, thanks for sharing Tif.

xx Kate

Hm, interesting! Never saw Dean as the type to enjoy the California lifestyle. A lot of story in 100 words, nicely done!

What a last line! Changes the tone of the whole piece totally. Really impressed at how you've achieved that in such a limited amount of words. Great.

Chick x

Wow, this one's piercing.

I hope they're not those terrible red shorts he wore in the gymnasium!

deansbabybird

Interesting glimpse of solo-Dean. Telling last line.

Sue

Very good!