AW! THAT'S SO SAD! I feel so bad for them, they're two of my favourites! Dang it... Now I'm all sad... On the other hand, this was well written, nice descriptions, and I liked Lucario's and Pikachu's mixing personalities.

I like the story simply for the fact that Lucario, a jackal, an animal with human characteristics feels more emotion than an ordinary human should. He really stood out to me in this story. Anthropomorphism is something that I am always a big fan of.

I always was a Pokemon fan in the past. Hopefully Pikachu will better himself somehow. Knowing that certain actions in small situations can lead to dire consequences. Seriously, though you should update and have Lucario come back (at least in a comatose state.) Great story! Puh-Lease continue!

I haven't really encountered Super Smash Brothers but I know most of the characters individually. I have to say it was odd for me to have Pikachu be able to say something besides her name in various forms, but understandable in the context of the story. ;)

Your descriptions are very nice and give a clear picture of the action. I really enjoyed the part where the Pokémon were trying to figure out how to use the camera - the human world is weird, I agree!

Eep the ending! I don't want to spoilerize anyone who is scanning the review page but eep! Perhaps it did come on just a bit quickly, I might add a few more paragraphs with some build-up if this were my story, (perhaps a hint about the location of the knife getting more and more hazardous) but it's up to you. Cheers! See you in the RLT.

So, I'm not completely fluent in this fandom, but I do remember bits and pieces so I'll try my best!

I actually like this a lot.

The grammar was pretty spot-on and I don't really see any mistakes worthy of being pointed out.

My only real criticism is that you have an overload of italics; I realize they're for a purpose, but it kind of distracts from the story.

I enjoyed the last line a lot.

All in all, this was a wonderful little ficlet.

Keep writing. :3

I was definitely not expecting that. Even though I am not a fan of this couple, it was very cute. Nice job, Tune!

Woah. That was good. I am always a sucker for unhappy endings. I found no mistakes or plot-holes (which is rare on fanfic) and overall really enjoyed it. Really really enjoyed it.

I also noticed that Zelda appeared to have been cheating on Link/Toon Link for Marth. Not good, espicially since Link has saved her butt about 50 times from various Sorcerers and other things.

You write great stories! A lot of detail is always good. I never put much detail because I always want to get to the point.