I'm assuming some writer's block here... and hoping that someday it clears up and you are able to finish this story! :)

In-te-res-ting.
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Update soon, that Kyoya and Haruhi moment was gold! I'm a fan of Kyoya x Haruhi too, y'know. But Mori is my first priority! But... there aren't many fics about him and Haruhi, sadly.

It's really sad to see Haruhi not remembering Takashi at all, and now she has cancer? That's just really unfair for her :( i really hope she'll remember soon, i don't want Takashi to disappear again.

Please update soon. You definitely have a way to draw a person into the story and then hitting them with a cliffhanger lol. It is such a great story.

I. Love. This. So. Damn. Much! Aaaaahh! So many beautiful similes! Sop descriptive! So dramatic! So Ouran! Kaoru, you evil bastard! Eeep! Update ASAP, please! Kudos x 5637834689342893830000000 :D :D :D!

wow i didn't see kaochan as the type to do something like that to her...he better come clean before the rest of the hc finds out

-double gasp- ZOMG! I sooo did not yet kinda did expect that! Wow intense! Gotta update soon please!

JERK! Not you... him. :P Stupid Kaoru... grrrrr lol

Hurry up n upload! Soonishly or i'll commit to stalkery and climb in your window and watch you while you sleep. I kid. Bur really, i want more!

Curse you! That is a terrible way tO end a chapter ( cliffy much). So nOt fair. Lol. But great job anyhow even if t

Loved it! ~Update soon, please~

awe all she did was remember her best friend, he can't hold that against her. nor should he give up! stay strong mori!

Aww… that's so sad! I feel extremely bad for him. I hope Haruhi's memories will return soon. But I know that their relationship will work one way or another once he helps her remember the fun times they had together. It's a really sad chapter but I can't wait till you update soon. I love your idea so far so please continue. XD

Aw so sad! Poor haruhi and mori! really good first chapte. I really want to see where you go with this and would love to see mori win haruhi's heart all over again :)

Wow! I'm already hooked! I like your style of writting and hope you continue to write! I saw the summary and thought "oh, well, this could be interesting!" and I am very interested in how this story will play out.