This is such a beautiful story!

very good

wish there was more of this!

Whooot eloping! Get it girl!

not bad

Loved this! It gave me the best feels, haha!

This was beautiful, sensual, sexy and so very in character. You've got their dynamic, the insouciance and honesty of their relationship, down perfectly. Thank you for writing one of the best Taang pieces I've read. :)

are you doing Taang week? Love your work and thought I'd ask! :)

Love it.

Love !

God this is gorgeous.

It doesn't happen very often where there is a story that is filled with such a powerful true love that you can't put the story down. This was one of those stories. Toph and Aang match each other very well, giving each other exactly what the other needs. In this story, they bring out the best in each other, and my favorite part is the ending where she realizes that Aang is all she ever needed. That is the sign of the deepest love and commitment to another person. True love does not need to be described explicitly, and this story does a great job! You have done a great job with this story TwiGurl5000! It has been a pleasure reading this story! Please keep writing!
Sincerely,
Andrew
Angel'sLove447

Really liked reading it (: it's a simple One-Shot yet it's so beautifully written it just makes me want to ship Taang even harder

How the bloody hell have I not bothered to read this yet? I loved it! Really, the way you progressed their entire relationship was just gorgeous, and the writing was amazing. You got the characters spot on and, unlike some of the non-canon pairing stories I've read, I can actually see this happening.

This was really well written. I really enjoyed it. Excellent job!

-Aria

I absolutely loved this. I'm shocked by the lack of feedback this story has received (at least, from what I can see). This is very well written and the story itself just flows, as cohese as water. I loved the feeling of this story.

Whoa. This was better than good, this was great! Some stories just seem so plausible, this is one of them!