Yum! That was pretty. Uhm, yeah. Pretty and tasty... how that relates to a story? Dunno, you wrote it, it's your accomplishment.

Ugh, damn moodswings. *kicks Mother Nature*

Okay, seriously now... I liked it. It's unusual and has a very powerful mood about it. Really nice.

I've been looking for a Catherine yuri. And this is all I could ask for, it has Sally (my fav GW girl) on the other side.

Though, it was sad, or something like that, at the end. It could be thought it wouldn't be happy since the beginnig, but this was more confusing and melancholic than sad.

Good one!

The plot looks fine, that's for sure. But, lady, methinks you use purple prose a bit too much ("amaryllis eyes" had me staring at the screen, eyes crossed). There are some of us here that either 1) don't have a dictionary readied at their side, 2) would rather read a story than be dazzled by someone's exotic vocabulary.

Your work is good, and it's guaranteed to earn you fanboys and fangirls. But, IMHO, you seem too exhibitionistic and self-absorbed to write something truely great and enjoyable.

You should correct these attitudes and write something less flashy and more direct.

This is a lovely story...but why in the end did I feel so sad?

(*scratches head...*) Not the usual dish of GW Yuri... but it's a tasty dish. (*Thumbs up sign*)

not bad... I think Wufei was a little ooc, but other that thst, it's good! Anyway, I like it. Write more!