Saya orang malang , saya nggak pinter bahasa inggris..kalo ada yang mau terjemahin review saya in english ya thank you banyak

Fanficnya enak...gaya bahasanya lugas gampang dibaca ,cuma untuk ukuran bacaan usia anak anak sayang agak agak "nyerempet sedikit panas" di chapter berikutnya ,kritik lho...nggak boleh marah ya...penulis...kan biar kedepannya kisahnya enak dibaca,,,udah bagus kok cuma jangan ada adegan "hot" ya, biar anak anak di indonesia bisa ikut baca soalnya adegan "love" kan kurang sesuai untuk anak anak asia dengan norma ketimuran yang kental
Afterall sudah bagus kok fanficnya mudah mudahan fanfic berikutnya bisa dibaca anak anak di asia, khususnya di indonesia
Good fanfic, good writer ...good luck

Such a beautiful surprise you update this fine story! We dont wont to loose you again! please, continue!

Hi,

Oh, you actually made me gasp with this: "I am the bastard daughter of Julius Caesar." I was not expecting this hehehehe.

So, Camilla is staying with Vorenus, is he going to fall for her? He should, the poor man deserves a little love.

Zophiel

Hi,

This is a good start so far. I like Camilla's background and I hope you'll reveal more about her story in later chapters. I really hope you continue with this!

This is a great start! I hope you continue - there aren't nearly enough ROME fics on this board!