Reviews for Show Biz: Act I
PrinceAshton chapter 17 . 5/24/2017
Babe. Darling. Hon. Lovely. Honestly, as much as I love you too, if I don't get a chapter soon, I might have to track you down. And trust my friends' words: you /don't/ want that. 3 Keep up the great work! :)
Mashiro Ruri chapter 17 . 3/10/2017
GYAAA~~! I NEED MORE! PLEASE UPDATE!
Latias426 chapter 17 . 7/30/2016
Hey there peeps! I may have been late in discovering this fic but I would like to say that this story was very cool :) I was definitely invested with their lives as K-Pop idols and I think it's awesome that this fic is bigger than a behind-the-scenes/everyday-lives vibe like some fics out there would be about. That's why I'm definitely hoping for the Act II 3 Now that Lavi love triangle problem (which absolutely 'rekt' me btw haha good job) is out of the way, it can now focus on the second reason for these Yullen idols to be brought together as Innocence: MANA. Yay! Definitely going to be a heartfelt plotline 3 I love it! That's the eay to establish the Yullen bonds hahahaha
Kudos to you both for having conceptualized a story that's clearly showing the dedication to show a world of Yullen in a K-Pop world, which also shows the passion you both have for these two things. :) In honor of DGM's second season, -Man Hallow, I hope you both would be able to get this fic back on and continue to share the Yullen love 3 Rooting for you both! Update this series soon! :* I know I would be keeping my eye out for this.
jy24 chapter 17 . 5/14/2016
Where is the final chapter? Please update this soon, I really want to read what happens next and this seems like there will be more Show Biz: Act. Please do continue, we really do love this fanfic.
the fullBlood alchemist chapter 17 . 4/12/2016
Uuuupppddate! :( *pouts* I waannnnna respad the next part! Pleeeeaaasee
Wanderererer chapter 17 . 3/12/2016
omg update please this is amazing.
nataia chapter 12 . 2/16/2016
I love this story! Update soon,please!
Guest chapter 17 . 12/4/2015
please update soon
Shadow Spears chapter 17 . 7/19/2015
I love this story! I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
Terra.L chapter 17 . 3/18/2015
Yay! Romance getting somewhere (: and I totally knew it as Kanda whom Lavi met at the orphanage. Pretty girl who tried to kill herself jumping off a roof. Whom Mana caught - Looking forward to your update!
AnimositysDaughter chapter 10 . 1/19/2015
Ha. Hahahahahahahahahahaha. I would get my degree in biotechnology just to genetically alter pigs to be able to fly. Or at least give them wings and a hang glider. And thank you for the chapter. And the story, I really do love it and it feeds my lovely DGM addiction/obsession.
smileysparklea chapter 17 . 8/7/2014
Juicy this fanfic juciy multiple personality diorder deak of course that break that was completly mutual kanda and allen kiss beautify lenalee and bak what a parady and best part was that knowing kanda gave lavi that eye thing very juciy
Patatachip chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
IM IN TEARS IM CRYING IM SOBBING WHY WHY DOES THIS HURT SO MUCH
xxXDanniXxx chapter 17 . 6/21/2014
A perfect end! When I started this story I was a bit skeptical, unfortunately I get a bit embarrassed when characters sing and act (I don't know why), and I knew this was going to be all about singing and the show-biz life style, but it seemed interesting. So I gave it a shot and was hooked! I loved the secrecy and the ties everyone had. Even though the universe was so different, the characters were mostly in character. ( Kanda was out a bit, but it was within reason and most of those times it was needed to progress through the story). I think Allen and Lenalee were spot on the entire time, which made this story all the more enjoyable for me. And for the most part the story was perfectly on track. I still wonder about how Kanda will react about Allen being Mana's adopted son, but this ending was just so perfect. Sometimes a fan fiction doesn't need a mature scene. And it's the best when people are satisfied without them, which I was! This story was thrilling and had plenty of arks to keep me hooked! I saw in a note that many people were not giving very great reviews and I was a bit saddened. I try to write complete reviews as much as I can, and when I believe the author deserves it. You have more than earned a good review, one far better than mine.

I loved the story all in all. The plot was interesting, it was well written, the dialog was great, and I enjoyed it.

Thank you for writing :)
Seraphinit chapter 17 . 6/19/2014
There's only one chapter left? Then where is it?! I want mooooreee D;
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