pLEASE please uptade!

wooow amzing writing skills 3 I cried

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Thank you so much for writing a fox's Dawn I really enjoyed your fanfiction

To 243vili: did you forgot the whole Obito and Madara fucking Yagura's brain (Sharingan)? The whole Boruto arc was BS because the writers forgot some basic shit and then have the nerve to say that it's all canon, despite creating plot holes and retconning the og series, constantly downplaying strong characters and making them act ooc. They might as well say that Mecha-Naruto is canon while they are it. Or all the fillers in the anime. And people would ate it all up and act like mindless sheeps.

The whole series is a real hype I loved it,but it's a sad day that you never updated it and it's been 3 years where is it at.

im actually hoping they can work this out and explain things to each other

I'm sad it ended. It was an amazing story

No noon on come on! Don’t stop there! Don’t be one of those annoying writers who never update! Cccooommmeee ooooonnnnn!

We want another chapter

Why is he even LOOKING for naruto? It's not like they can do anything even if they found him, the "council" banished him and tsunade backed down like a submissive whore... So what's even the point?.. say "hi"? Seems pretty stupid! "the things he's done are horrible"? In what way? To me they seem far too TAME. Especially if he expects to be on the winning side!

So how exactly does naruto suppose ANY of this is gonna work, if he won't kill any of his old "allies"? Then he's just a liability! Even in this fight, he should have at LEAST killed kakashi... and then maybe kiba to show he was serious! They "cast him away" he needs to do the same!

Ok, a LOT of things don't make sense now, #1. konoha doesn't even have a jinchuriki, so instead of the akutski coming for them, they should be worried about kumo and iwa coming, because they have no deterrent anymore! #2 Why is ichiraku's still in konoha? They would have left after that debacle with naruto. #3 Why hasn't all the other countries turned on them? Spring/snow, land of birds, land of flowers, and wave were allied with Naruto (the leaf only through him), no "him", no alliance. And before you say "they don't know", it's been 2 years, more then enough time to find out! #4. Suna already ended their alliance with konoha over naruto (you said so yourself, in chapter 1) so if last chapter they were hoping for something, they didn't get it, and I don't even see why they were there in the first place. #5. The akutski can ALREADY take on villages, heck pein alone would have completely ERASED leaf without naruto being there! "tobi" could too.. They don't NEED to "train" anymore(not to mention itachi and kisame could have killed: asuma, kakashi, kurenai, and gai when they were all put together had they tried!)... Already this story is filling full of holes!

"when the time comes"? In canon they didn't seem to have a problem with ripping apart a village whenever they wanted! Yuck this is one of those "save everything for the end" stupid stories isn't it?

Never liked that whole "wait" thing, he's already waited 2 years that is already enough "wait" time.. Naruto has enough enemies both within and without the leaf, that he can "snipe" any amounts of people/targets at various times and still have plenty more to drag the story out if that's what the author is aiming for.. Doing it all in one strike is just dumb, it seems far too rushed. It is NOT "sweeter" to wait! It is best to "strike while the iron is HOT!" and "revenge is a dish best served hot, as the flames of HELL!".

Also why are they putting garaa back? One of the things that was the worst with the akutski was when they caught one of the jinchuriki they went OUT OF PLAY for everyone else. Not just hand them back, there is NO NEED for all this "cloak and dagger" B.S. It's WAR plain and simple, not "mission impossible".