| Reviews for Jack X |
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The Richmaster chapter 27 . 1/14/2016 This was an amazing story; you did an amazing job of balancing the two rather different shows with each other in a way that it doesn't just seem like you took a few characters a dumped them in the other show. I particularly enjoyed the way that you weren't afraid to change things up, introduce other characters and go in further depth to certain topics showed in canon. The characters were done extremely well; they reacted in ways that I would expect, considering the differing situations they found themselves in. Great job on this; I would have loved to see more but realise it's not likely, good luck on any future endeavours. |
starfire2rav chapter 27 . 4/25/2014 I have to say I'm impressed. To be honest, I didn't expect much from this story. Both X-Men and Xiaolin Showdown are easily crossed shows, generally following 'Character becomes a mutant and magically joins the X-Men' and 'Character is secretly a Xiaolin Dragon and suddenly Shen Gong Wu appear'. I assumed that this would be some sort of combination of the two, and I guess it kind of is, but done in all the right ways. You've done an amazing job of blending the two universes, something that not everyone can do. You're following the sequence of episodes and showing the effects of Jack living at the Institute, without making it feel like he's just tagged to the side of canon or being a Gary-Stu. The differences feel very real. It's never made sense to me that the show collects the cast and then only deals with them, so I like that you continued adding more mutants. I especially enjoy how Toad is written. You gave him a realistic character development from a standard delinquent stereotype, to a leader that actually cares about the people he's leading; even to the point of putting aside his personal grudges and helping the X-Men just because they're mutants. I understand you're reasons for going on Hiatus, and I hope you can return soon to continue this story. Great Job! |
Nyx811 chapter 27 . 1/27/2014 update again soon when ya can |
Guest chapter 27 . 11/9/2013 Is okay, take your time, great story man... |
Guest chapter 26 . 11/9/2013 Well, looks like Lockheed will be trouble... |
Guest chapter 25 . 11/9/2013 Okay, so Sunspot can score a one hit ko on him... |
Guest chapter 24 . 11/9/2013 Yeah that works cause comic Mimic was a tad overpowered... |
Guest chapter 23 . 11/9/2013 Damn, some mutant powers really run your life... |
Veedramon chapter 22 . 11/9/2013 Well yeah it was a sad story... |
Veedramon chapter 21 . 11/9/2013 Victor? Is just me or he sound a LOT like certain villain from Spiderman? He even has the same powers! |
Veedramon chapter 20 . 11/9/2013 Well, looks like Jack friends will be exposed to a Wu battle... |
Veedramon chapter 19 . 11/9/2013 You could have added all this answers to a real chapter... |
Veedramon chapter 18 . 11/9/2013 Well is new york so... spiderman... |
Veedramon chapter 17 . 11/9/2013 Well maybe Amara had problems controlling her powers so that’s why she didn’t' go to class before? |
Veedramon chapter 16 . 11/9/2013 Well Jack has become really nicer, he got them a cool car for cheap... |