i cant wait for the next chapter! _

Glad to see you're back! I can't wait for more of this

First off- you've heard “A Dance Round The Memory Tree”? Did you creep the entire Narnia soundtrack after you listened to “This Is Home”? *Le loves both songs*
Okay now to the real crap. o.o
It is amazing.
ASDFGHJKL; WOMAN WHY DID YOU NOT INFORM ME YOU UPDATED THIS? IT'S FANTABULOUS EVEN IF YOU DON'T FINISH IT. ;_; I luff it like my own child that I put up for adoption because I couldn't afford a kid. Cause it's kind of like that anyways. Okay I should probably stop now.
Le random Berry out

I can't wait for the next one!

I do hope this ends up with PrUk. I like the story anyway. I hope you update soon.

I. Love. You.

Please update soon I'm ecstatic to know what happens next!

Well, hi, there.

I thought I'd leave a review. So...yeah. Obviously.

Well, I don't normally like OC fics (for the obvious reasons-Mary-Sues, inaccurate, etcetera), especially in the Hetalia fandom, just because there are so many things that people are able to mess up on, and oftentimes, their OC's become less than desrable...to me, at least. Fortunately, I don't think that your OC will be too bad, as long as you keep it realistic. And stuff.

I really like HetaOni, and so I'm excited to be reading a fic about it. You have a wonderful way of telling stories, and your grammar isn't bad, either. There are two things, though, that I've noticed.

The first is an obvious and very popular thing to do-using phonetic spellings with Prussia. I mean, it doesn't hinder my understanding of the story much, but it feels a little...um, well, crude, I suppose? I'm not sure; it just feels out-of place. But only a little, and so this is a light-hearted comment more than anything, really.

My second and final detail that I've noticed is that you do not separate the dialogue between characters. In most books, they set it up as so:

Person One cried, "My life is a lie!"

"Suck it up," Person Two replied harshly.

"B-but..." whimpered Person One. "You're mean!"

Yeah...half-hearted dialogue examples for the win. But hopefully, you can see that each person gets his own line for their dialogue, because they're selfish like that. :)

I just wanted to point that out, because it does slow down my progress because I need to figure out constantly who is speaking at the moment.

But, other than those few little warnings and suggestions, your story is very nice with an interesting plot. I really enjoy your writing style; it's descriptive (what I lack). Your plot development seems fine, as long as you stay FAR away from those dreaded Sue-symptoms. I, as a reader, do not know enough about your OC to make a guess about her, and I am sure that that is a good sign. What I mean by that is that she's not in it enough to be considered a Sue. So for that, I congratulate you. :D

Good luck writing!

~Doodlebugg

I liked this, a lot, until I read the part midway through one of the chapters about the eyes changing color. Then I realized where this was going and stopped.

You're not a bad writer, you are good at building up mood and descriptions, but the OC here...