I can't believe you update this story after years. Nice to see again.

da fuq you updated !
I am Soo happy

kind of weird but I liked it

interesting

I binge-read this story and I know it's been a long time, but is that really the end? I refuse to accept that. I really like your writing style. One of the best Hisoka x OC I have read so far, and I'm still hoping that one day you'd realize that you want to continue this story. Huhuhu. I really wanna know what would happen when Hisoka finds her again. D:

Please update. I really love your story. The way you write it really make it interesting. I had read you other story, You Disrupt Me and it so amazing. I can't get it out of my mind. Your story be my inspiration to improve my own writing. Even it takes a long time for the story to update, I can't stop myself from waiting and it had been a year. So please update. 3

So, I was feeling nostalgic and went to reread your story. Well you updated 3 chapters and I didn't notice. Oops! Now time for a good review. Your characters are well written and feel pretty real. They have defining personalities and are easily told apart. Your writing is descriptive enough that it's easy to visualize the story. And I love your Hisoka "love" isn't a smultzy romance. It's psychotic and morbidly hilarious. (Hisoka's doing all this wooing, but all she does is get mad) And the direction the story is heading is building up some intense . . . tension and I do worry for our characters. Maybe not Bryce. He seems like a douche, but whatever. There's no way they can hide Ayaka from Hisoka too long. I wonder what his response will be to see her? Ayaka's nen shield seems pretty cool, though I'm wondering about her nen limits. Because certain have assigned forms when she mixes her nen with blood (Wing/rifle, Zushi/sword), is animal blood more malleable to her? O is it different with the blood of other nen users? Ryuu and Bryce aren't facing off against Hisoka next chapter, right? So the other guy is the target Hisoka wants. So with people infiltrating the island how does the contest work out? Sorry, I'm rambling, aren't I?

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeee UPDATE! Pretty pretty prettty please! With lots of cherries on top!

This is the first Hisoka x OC I've read and it's really good! I stay up late just reading it so please update! :( :)

I know its been too long but pretty please update... This is such an interesting and twisted story...

More! I must have more! :) awesome story.

can you please update this story

this is amazing best story ive read about hisoka so far thank you

i hate this story it ruined every other story im reading at the moment yes its that good and by hate it i mean im deeply in love with it pleases update before i go insane i think i already did OO anyway update plz

still waiting for a review omg omg omg I can't wait till hisoka finds her again fangirl mode

Love it! ADD TO FAVORITE!