Damn only 1 chapter. It caught my attention and I really want to know what will happen. Tina's dad will probably be killed because he hides a summoner in his house and Yuna will have to flee with Lulu and Wakka and somehow they'll meet up with Tidus and Auron an the others. Damn I'm really curious. I'll look forward to the next chapter.

Please update soon.

MORE PLEASE! Your style is fantastic and your idea can take so many awesome directions! I cannot wait for the next installment

Hi hope you write more as the beginning is very good.

I just wanted to mention that there's a rumor Ffx is being remade for the ps3

And like you I like both 8 and 10. But 10 is far and away my favorite.

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So far so good.

Necromancers are so much cooler than disvowed priests. Just don't make Yuna act like she did in the cannon, far to cheerful.

Great dialog so far, it really sets a mood and portrays emotion very well. You could put a bit more detail on the surroundings but I got a decent mental picture.

I have a few plot ideas that you could use, message me if you want to hear them.

Looks interesting! Looking forward too more)

Love MB 3