Her come backs are to funny for words, loved the song and yes I very much like the story so far. Coming up with a name for her is not going to be easy, a couple I though of; Sight seer, Flashback (I know that she can see the future to, but couldn't really think of a name that covered both), Cyoptal (si-op-tal just something I throw together), shadow and Prophet Tracker. You may already have a name for her and if you do congrats, I was raking my brain trying to think of one. If not I hope these help or at least give you an idea of names you may like or may not want to use.

Perfect name xD Please update soon!

Update soon? I loved it. Amazing. I can't wait for more... :)

ME GUSTA! Please! More more more!

I like the general idea for the story, and your character, while needing a bit of fine-tuning, seems to be heading in the right direction as far as avoiding a Sue goes. I will say, however, that I strongly encourage you to check your spelling; we have so many tools at our being one of my favorites, as well as various other sites geared towards bettering our writing-you only have to search for them. Another thing I'd like to mention is the structure of your sentences: they're a bit choppy and well, simple. Not to say that all writing must be elaborate, but try to be more descriptive.

Bottom line: A decent start, but needs some work. I hope that you glean something useful from this review. Good luck!

Hmmm, I wonder what her codename would be? I can't wait to find out more!

I love this please update on this real soon please!

This chapter makes me sad. :(

good chapter

Eeeeep! Lol :) Loved it. Update soon.

:D cool story i really liked reading it an i hope that u add more real soon!

woo love it please update soon

ooooooooo, it's getting good! I really liked it and i hope you continue it!

I can't wait for the next chapter it was sad about Diego