What a crappy story.

a wonderful story with nice twists and turns in it . I love it :)

I'm ashamed of you people. This story isn't worth praise - it's a ridiculous power fantasy of a childish and immature protagonist being all but shat on, then returning to take revenge by basically being an annoying brat to everyone around. What's wrong with you all?

Life Debts. Life Debts. Life Debts.

Deep despair and extreme joy with a bunch of amazing silliness throughout. What an emotional rollercoaster!
Thank you for a great story.

Ouch!

There are little nits that I could pick, but I'm really enjoying the story and I think that the writing is really good.

Great story. I really enjoyed reading it.

I am reading this again as it is one of my fav stories, and I think the best one you've written. However, can't remember if I originally reviewed this chapter. I'm having trouble following the timeline. In your story, Harry was trained by Dumbles. Was that before or after he left school? Wondering, because he then came to America and spent two years in school, and he's been there a total of eight years (your words), so just wondering how it is that he is now 28, unless he was finished at Hogwarts (at 18) and spent 2 years training before the final confrontation, then being 20? Or did he leave have the battle with Voldie at 18, and then spend 2 years doing what before he attended school in America? Either way, why would he go back to school? Where are the missing years? What was he doing?

Okay, you seriously need to research officer rank structures. Captain to Lt Commander is a DEMOTION, because you are mixing Army/Marine ranks, in which Captain is two bars, with the Navy-only rank of Lt Commander, which is two steps below Navy Captain, and is called Major in the other services. The two-bar rank in the Navy is called Lieutenant.

Wow what a story! Thanks for sharing!

Why did you start this story in third person, past tense? Now it's suddenly first person PRESENT AND PAST TENSE. And now in THE SAME CHAPTER IT IS PRESENT AND PAST TENSE FIRST PERSON AND THIRD PERSON.

No wonder you left this website. You're a fucking idiot.

Good! It's about damn time Harry told the magical world of Briton to take a flying leap off an extremely tall cliff without saving themselves! Then we come to Fumblemort the great. He was directly responsible for the Potters deaths. He convinced them to move to Godric's Hollow and go under the Fedilius Charm which he himself cast. As he cast it he had to know who the Secret Keeper was. He also knew just how piss poor a teacher Snape was and did nothing about it. Which resulted in many less Arors and Healers as they could stand to continue in his potions course through NEWTS. That should be treated as treason as it allowed less law enforcement to deal with the Death Eaters and Voldemort. So I see Harry leaving the magical worlds of Briton and Europe as an extremely good thing. I hope he has the sense to clean out all his families possessions from Gringotts or maybe exterminating them and clean out all the Death Eaters and his betrayers vaults before leaving the coun5try forever. They deserve no less.

Your story is fairly interesting but your English! Couldn't you find someone good at spelling and grammar to help you as beta? This fic needs help badly.

he is a demolitian expert but no explosive expert, ignoring the fact that the notion of an explosive expert is not proper enlgish, could you please explain to us plegbians what this means? or is it just shock and awe witiout logic