Cliff hangar! I loved it, but I don't know what happens next? Will there be a next smewhere else? Is it just done?

Please don’t take this down! Even though you’ve been using a ghost writer, this story is still your idea to begin with and belongs on your page! Khalthar can have a copy, there’ll be duplicates, but that’s okay with me! This is a great story and I’d be really sad to see it disappear!

I could have used a warning that it was this dark early on.

This is a fantastic story.

The way of honour being in every aspect of a Yautjas daily life is surprisingly realistic, when you think about it. (I certainly hadn’t thought about it until I read it here)

You have nothing to be sorry for. You are the one who published the story, so that everyone else could read it, not whoever wrote it. It’s far better to publish the story so we can read it than refuse to publish the story at all.

And you gave the other person the credit in the end too.

Lilith is a lovely character, you have both vaptured the psychological feelings that a person would have perfectly. There are a few things (mostly nit picking) about her knowing things, was she ten when she was put in the basement?
Another nitpick is that I feel there are too many authors notes. I don’t care how long it takes as long as it’s not a stopped production altogether.
On that note, please let us all know if and when there will be a new story created by a new author or provide us with a link to the continued story.

On a more personal note, I understand your pain and loss of your family members. Depression will always be with you, but only if you let total disparity and sadness take over. I wish you luck in the battle against it.

“There will be much honour in you defeating this enemy that will not die without a hard fight.”

All the best, Fox10

OH God I laughed so hard at the Hunt for the SPace rats XD Lilith is having a lot of fun :)

Goddamnit this story really it tugging hard at my feelings :( ANd then I cant stop reading Its just too good...

WHen Lilith does start speaking, then it'll be a major breakthrough! Guan is being so patient with her and Lilith is starting to catch up that she will not be harmed. Maybe she'll eventuelly start to understands that the only one that were worthless in this story were the sad excuse for parents that she had the bad luck to be born from...

Oh my God... No wonder the poor kid's fucked up in the head. I think those Predators have their hads more then full with her now. I really want to hunt down and kill those worthless pieces of humanity that dared call themselves 'parents' now... *growl*

I laughed way too hard at the last part XD That little shit had it coming though ÀÀ You dont flip off a Pred without consequences lol

I love this story, this is the second time I have read it.
I wish you made some follow up one shots or a sequel.

Gosh, that 14 year old is a prick! I hope she DOES die! Then we wont hear her rude inner dialogue the whole time. Not likely since she's the main character. But seriously, the main character has to be likeable! Otherwise we root for the other team. Who wants to read a 27 chapter story about a horrible person? Im going to chapter two to see if there's SOMETHING reedemable about her...

it is a good story please dont take it down i love it.

Hey, I know what I said but this was an excellent story. I’m sorry you never got to finish it woth everything that happened. My dad passed away last Dec, my grand dad May and then my fiancé March so I kinda understand how shitty everything must be. Juat hang in there alright

Dude I came for the humor, what happened to all the humor

Love this work keep it up