This is beautiful

update plz

Neat first chapter

it's incredibly good! I love this story. and somehow I want Harry to become mcgonegals phonex. she as the houseteacher of Gryffindor is literally involved in nearly everything Harry and his friends do so being with her he could take care of them. though you have a point in breaking Sirius out first as he is probably as lonely and love deprived as mcgonegal. truth to be told, Sirius is my favourite Harry potter character together with Luna but somehow in this story I really want Mcgonegal to be less lonely or so. she was so happy to be trusted. though she might be undeserving as she could tell that Harry was not falkws though I have to cut her some slack as falkws isn't hers to know as good to tell the difference.

Will Harry stage a Phoenix prison break?

Great chapter Update soon

Awesome!cant wait for the next chapter!1 .

This is a cool idea. I hope you write more!

awesome story:) really unique and interesting!

haha harrys so cute!

Hey, great story. Just want to let you know that I am enjoying it and that I await the next chapter. Also, that scene that you described, the burning day of Fawkes that Harry witnessed, was during the second book. Harry was in trouble for something, (either the incident on Halloween or something) and was worried about being in trouble and was actually thinking about something happening to "Dumbledore's bird" when he caught flame and Harry got into a panic over it. That was when he found out about Phoenixes.

well? is he going to save Sirius, or motivate him to escape by stealing a foto of scabbers and Percy? Percy would be a student at the time right?, I think so maybe... oh forget it, I'm not good at guessing, but I bet you already have a plan, maybe he'll get himself settled first, hey aren't there a theory that when you have a pheonix animagus you will have trhe same relative age as the bird circulating around ? that would make Harry a toddler at the moment right? or if you aren't going with that theory, wait I know you aren't; you've already described him as redhaired, so maybe he can infiltrate the Weasleys to steal that foto while he's checking up on them, but he would have to have a job and he has no papers so, really he can't get much of a job, maybe fake some forreign school papers and get an internship at Eeylops Owl Imperium and look out for a rat with a missing finger
ooh, or maybe if he just saves Sirius he could live at Grimmuald Place... though all those things will make this story rather boring and repettitive if you don't keep the pheonix streak, which I haven't mentioned at all, and since Fawks is going to show him a safe place it might just be somewhere in egypt, maybe by the sphinx
okay, well either way, you are the only one who truely knows what's going to happen, so would you please enlighten us? It's been over a year since you updated this story last and it would be great if you continued it, I know that this story is a sort of side buisness, but I really think it's going somewhere

cool fic looking forwards to the next chapter

please please update soon...

I love it