Reviews for Beneath The Surface
Guest chapter 23 . 6/28
At least a shark did not show up but three-day was ruined:(
Guest chapter 7 . 6/26
Whit is so wise
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26
Love it
mauldinanna chapter 5 . 6/26
umm there days was like date. The blue green eyes .I noticed RobPatz eyes have a blue grey thingz going on .
Flora Mile chapter 58 . 3/24
Loved this story, everyone should give it a read
Flora Mile chapter 35 . 2/4
Wow, I have to say that in most stories I have a little love for Alice, she is always they good annoying one. But your Alice is down right nasty and a bully to her sister! All this progress the team have made and she keeps trying to bring her sister down, not letting her concur her fears and get the dream she wants.
Flora Mile chapter 21 . 1/30
Oh my you had me laughing my ass off... "Back away from the inter. Deflate the situation" loved it.

Your one liners are fantastic!
Flora Mile chapter 20 . 1/30
Wow, Bella turned a corner here and the MMR team were with her the whole way holding her hand. What a chapter. Plus poor Masen and his shark, sad!
Flora Mile chapter 16 . 1/30
Again... they leave your head spinning, yes, I understand why it upset him.

When will they just give in!
Flora Mile chapter 14 . 1/30
Man... really... it seems these two are never going to meet in the middle. Everyone see it, he sees it, but he just keeps hurting, unbelievable
Flora Mile chapter 11 . 1/29
You made me cry in this chapter for Bella and Edward. I understand he is angry, but it was an accident and on top of that, now he is reading Bella's and Whit's friendship all wrong... frustrating!
Guest chapter 40 . 11/14/2019
Love how u r not rushing your story
Guest chapter 30 . 11/11/2019
Loving this story.
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Guest chapter 15 . 11/6/2019
Is the anniversity of her shark coming up?
Guest chapter 11 . 11/4/2019
Where is emse?
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