I really really wish you would continue this or start a sequel. I always keep coming back to this story it’s so good! I love the concept and the relationship of Harry and Snape. Please continue!

Of the two fics I've read, this is the second one you started, abandoned with an un-finish, and labeled "Complete." I'm done.

Way to blow your cover, Harry! How is anyone supposed to think you are just a regular 11-year old?

Of course this story is abandoned. Fanfiction needs to make it to where stories can't be posted unless complete. It's SO disappointing getting into a story, only to find out it has not been touched in years.

Why the fuck does Remus keep saying ‘Severus’ in every goddamned sentence. Fix that, bud. And if you’re going to have Harry call them something, be consistent. Like Snape as ‘Uncle Sev’, Remus as ‘Uncle Remmy’ or ‘Moony’, and Sirius as ‘Uncle Siri’ or ‘Padfoot’.

Dialogue was empty and depressing to read, devoid of personality and emotions, and I was confused to whom had which sentence without you writing their names. Also, a dementia!Harry? 100, and this old man who is a father and grandfather and possibly great grandfather, still lives In his teen years unable to move on, yet still had moved on? yea, dementia. That's gonna be awkward In an 11 year old body if he's trying to remake his history.

Don't stop at 18
PLEASE!

:D Noice

Wha

:)

Background Dramione? *squeals*

:D

Awwwwwww

Love Sirius's reaction!

Harry is acting a lot younger than 11 years old. I guess he never recovered from the traumas in his life if he has so little control over his emotions.