Oh gosh this was horrifying and amazing! You are such a wonderful writer

that was the most brilliant thing ever... i cant even describe how fantastickly amazing that was aaaaaaaaaaaaa you are a very good writer!

this is amazing! very dark my heart is pounding already, fantastic job

i want to read more and i want to see the picture and i want to read it in german!

wow... I read both and they were really... well they were excellently written and also very dark. I both loved and hated it (hated because poor Sherlock! and also John :( ) but great job _

I am literally blown away. This is the most powerful, gripping story that I have read on here in a LONG time. I was literally holding my blanket in one fist while I read it was so engaging and suspenseful. I seriously freaked out. This is so amazing. I don't even have the words to fully tell you how this made me feel. I don't even understand what you did to do this to me in the first place.

All I can say is that you are amazing and this line totally captivated me: "The first time it gives out on the cold paving stones of Regent's Street and it is John who breathes for him, John who massages life back into his body, breaking two ribs in the process. He'll never tell Sherlock how he came to that injury, and no one else will either."

It just shows their relationship so well, and how close Sherlock came to dying. I really, really love it.

Very intense and well-done!

I would never have guessed that English isn't your native language. You have a flare for it few native speakers ever achieve.

After your lovely review to my own wip, I went out to see what youd done and found this utterly beautiful, and yes, terrifying story..Just finished Ch. 1 and have to go be productive for society right now but eagerly looking forward to reading Ch. 2 later today.

Oh WELL DONE, YOU !

I love it! This is made of pure awesomeness!

I had to look up this 'zalgo'-thing but even after I read about it, I think I still don't understand it entirely XD But anyway, I love it how you described everything, at some points it was so creepy! And John was so great and I can totally see him the way you wrote him!

Please keep up the good work!

Very good. Oooh, that message at the end(Rest Assured)was creepy.

I like that way you did this but I do wish that you had shown a more of John freaking out during the first time Sherlock's heart stops. But that's just me. lol

Like I said... Good job.

Well...that was intense. I am now deeply curious and a bit creeped out. I hope you continue this soon.

I'm terrified! My hands are shaking so hard I can barely write this review. I saw the picture. Oh my goodness. I'm so, so frightened. I have to thank you though. This is how I need to feel while writing my horror novel.

What the heck is going on! Please post more soon!