I don't know how College works in New Zealand but if you are late too many times you just fail the class.

I am going too take a leap and say you'er not a college stunden or know anyone who is in college

That being said I going to stick with this story. becoues you may of noteis that the vast majoritly of school storys are ether "fanfiction" Romeans between cannon characters or storys where the author ask for OCs from his/her readers and ends up doing nothing. In a way your story is a ture school story.

now for the rest of the review

you need to put the ' after the n in the word don't

by the way what happpen to his pokemon?- after he turn into furret there was not any word about his shirt, pant or the pokeballs he was wereing

sorry for any misspellings and hope to see this updated