omg this is so sweet! Ya know that kind of love that's just so pure? That you won't even need sex (if it comes to it or they become old), like they can be happy and totally in love until death do them part. In real life, only few achieve that. But I felt like their bond is the same as those long term couples. A much more fewer couple who died seconds after their lover died lol it's so pure it makes my heart squeeze and envious of them

So nice! Can't describe in words! If I was there where ever you, the author, are, I would have hugged you to tell you how awesome this story was! Please keep on writing stories like this. Love from a stranger to a stranger bound by a story.

Aww i find it really cute well until the end .. would it really kill narutos friends to at least be happy for them.. Everyone has ups nd downs nobodys perfect afterall.. The end was kinda a letdown it didnt sit well wth me nd could have done better.. But i do luv the pacing :))

In all honesty I feel like this would be a great marriage without the "who's lucky?" comments. I can imagine this marriage failing due to that sole fact. Failing because both of them feeling they are not worthy of each other or both felling they're too good for each other. Failing because of the feeling of who carries more weight in the relationship and how many times someones actions where sincere. Naruto's nature is to not mind the comments of 'you aren't worthy of Sasuke'. At least on the outside. I feel he would probably be sad on the inside but hide it, as it is his nature to hide sadness or pain (Proven from the fact it states he never cries and he cried in secret). Sasuke probably isn't used to people calling him out on his flaws so this would affect him a lot too. I feel like this marriage will fail in the future for such a tiny thing. Logically, this wouldn't really matter at all considering they've only had the lucky comments a few times in there 28 years of living. But, considering the main focus of the story is the lucky comments, it makes it seem bigger and important than it should be. Like blatant foreshadowing. In real life it wouldn't matter, just a wast of time. But in show's, books, movies, or ect. there is no need for waisting time because nobody cares for the pointless details unless they secretly contribute to the overall plot. In this, it seems. the overall plot is they are getting married and the lucky comments are useless details. But because this is a story, useless details don't need to be added in. They couldn't just be for fluff. No matter how you look at it, the lucky comments give you a negative vibe. If it were part of fluff then they would have an argument about it and make up, ultimately leading to a better understand each other and a deepening of their relationship. This argument never happens leaving the tension that would have been erased with the argument still in the air. Its not fluff so that should leave the obvious conclusion that it secretly leads to the overall plot or conflict.
The end doesn't leave THAT much of a bad vibe. It shows Naruto happy which ultimately helps because the beginning gave the impression Naruto was the only one unhappy. Then, it shows Sasuke a little sad but agreeing that he isn't deserving of Naruto. This proves the point the lucky comments strain the relationship because the person getting them seems to be less happy than his partner. Ultimately though the whole unworthy is a terrible thing to have in a relationship because it causes you to be insecure, overcompensate, and be unhappy. The only thing you could direct your unhappiness to is your spouse.
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That was way too long but it was what I got from the story and I was wondering if anyone else got this or is this just me? Am I just reading too much into this? Sorry btw for the grammar mistakes but for some reason my english is weird right now. Good job on the story!

Im leaving now... I spent waaaay to much writing this review...

i thought you'd pop out a somewhere at the end

Awww this is so sweet! Plus the most important problem with ther relationship- it seems like Sasuke never feels like Naruto is amazing. I loooove Sakura in this, realistic and so useful at the end. Naruto crying before performances broke my heart. I really like the singer!AU too! Yeeees Gaara is the only one who appreciates Naruto...The cutest SasuNaru fic I've read :)

This was really cute, I liked it )

All I can say is, Awww... I loved the plot and how you did the time skips. It kept the story going at a good pace. It was sweet and cute and if it was a plushie I'd hug it to death... .

This one was really cool. It's been a while since I read a really good K story. I'm glad I still actually read the lower rated stories because you never know if there's a diamond hidden deep down. Like this one! XD Love the story.

Great story. I wish I'm as lucky as the both of them xD

This is such a cute story! The only thing I wanted to see was when Naruto, and perhaps Sasuke, admitted their feelings for each other.

Sasuke really is lucky because he is such a damn bastard going off on his vengeance scheme. He's lucky because Naruto never gives up on him. X3

A very sweet story, and also keeping Naruto and Sasuke IC, in that Naruto really is very forgiving and has always wanted Sasuke to acknowledge him, while Sasuke is very standoffish and selfish and doesn't easily show his kind side.