I love this story I can tell it was well writen, and you put in a lot of thought when you gave us a new chapter. The reason why I love it so much is because you put Roxas through so much, put him through so much pain, made it seem like there was no end to the crulty fate had given him only to set him free. From that he grew as a person and into his own hero. It's stories like these that become my favorites, its a great story and I hope you keep writing. And I want to thank you for your dedication to this story, even though you could have quit writing it you continued and finished it. And I like that quality in a writer so overall great story, and I hope to read more from you. )

Delete the story from this site, dumbass. You've already moved it, there is absolutely no need for you to continue clogging up the sections where story content is supposed to go. If anyone still gives a shit about you, they've looked at your PROFILE where this information is supposed to be. You can't even link to other sites from this site, so why in the hell are you still trying to?

Funny how you deleted all the chapters, but left all the ass kissing comments up. Reeks to high heaven.

The Links don't work

I would totally read this story. will be waiting on the edge of my seat.

Thank you soooo much for deciding to continue your story! It's one of my favorites

Yes! More please!

Holy mother, this cannot lead to anything good. Please update soon.

Yours,
PandaMustache

I love this story. There's so much potential and the plot is cool and different then your other stories. I've read most of your other stories on archiveofourown, they're awesome! I really think you should update this story and Magnetic Attraction. :)

Pwease update! This is a great story and I cannot wait until you will update

Next time you come up with a story you don't like, then don't write it down and don't post it on the internet, and don't listen to people who wants you to continue the story you don't like. I really like this fic and I'm sure it could become a favorite of mine, but all of that whining about how much you hate "this dumbass story" and won't let your favorite characters in it because it "suck so much" was too much, grow up for heavens sake!? I, for one, are done and can't finish it. Just an advice for your future writing :I

amazing. finish it soon plz :D

I know this is a late review like a year or more but please can you finish the story? I was really enjoying Roxas' healing. And plus major cliff hanger Chives died! I know you hate it as said in almost all of them but pretty please wright more...

Even though you dislike writing these types of stories they are written beautifully. Keep on writing! I hope you will get some one like a publisher or someone else important to notice your writing. I am loving it.

i frikin love this story! PLEASE make a chapter where axel and roxas do have sex but its not rape. its kind and sweet gentle sex

I really love this Fanfiction... Yet why do you write this story when you don't enjoy it? Why can't you adjust it so that YOU enjoy it more? I love how it's not rushed, and the characters are so developed. I think you do a great job, but I hope you enjoy writing it, even a little...