Update immediately, please!

Your story is great! I'm so glad I persevered and read every word of it. I didn't go to bed last night because I was reading it. I love the tension and drama and I think you portrayed the characters very well. Great job!

I really like this story. It was a bit hard to read but it was definitely worth the power through! Good work

I know I haven't finished this story yet, but still. WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH LOKI. And it hurts how much Steve is willing to help Charlotte. Gosh, I like Loki, but not enough to save him after killing innocent people! But seriously, awesome story! I'm never not enjoying this!

THE. FEELS. YOU. ARE. GIVING. ME. IS. UNDENIABLE.

I cried a little at the end. I'm glad there is a sequel! :)

I enjoyed reading this. I was really happy to see that your oc wasn't a Mary Sue. I am now looking forward to the sequal.

this was amazing! * looks for sequal* keep up the good work!

Wow! That was fantastic! Its 2AM and Im going straight to the sequel(;

This entire fic deserves to be published and sold. That is all.

Steve is so sweet that it breaks my heart, oh my goodness

I'm so sad that this fic is over! I really do hope that you write a sequel. The relationships in this fic really got to me, and I hate to see them go. I also have to say that I've never read action scenes in fanfiction that had my heart racing the way yours did. This has definitely become one of my favorite fics ever. So, I'm really looking forward to the sequel.. When, not if, you publish it. :-)

I love this story! I found it yesterday evening and stayed up all night to finish it! To be honest I wasn't a Loki fan bit this story made me realize I have a bit of a soft spot for him! Also I love how you wrote Tony and Thor, for some reason the scene where Thor went clothes shopping and how he kept calling Jarvis 'House' made me nearly laugh out loud, and I would have if it wasn't 3 a.m. and my parents were asleep. I can't wait for the next story! Please come out with it as soon as you can!

This whole thing was very well written from start to finish. Can't wait for the sequel!

I really enjoyed this fic! You're writing and descriptions were a breath of fresh air! And your character development was great! I really liked the way you made this your own, since you were writing it before the Avengers came out, but once it did you were able to tie in everything really well! Great fic and I can't wait for the sequel!