DAW! This is TOO adorable and I may have teared up. -.-

That was gorgeous. :) I loved the idea, and you wrote it extremely well for spending only a few hours on it. Great job! :)

Hey lovely! :) this was very cute and I really liked it! I have one or two suggestions but just know that I am in no way a professional writer or better than you or more experienced than you or anything, I am simply offering my opinion as you asked for it :) Okay so I noticed a few times you tend to 'tell not show' when describing things. What I mean by that is saying something like 'so and so is bored' instead of writing something like 'so and so stared off into space blankly, waiting to be entertained.' That implies that they are bored but does it in a more descriptive way and often that's more interesting to read. I hope this is making sense, just remember I don't always know what I'm talking about so feel free to ignore me haha. The other suggestion was just to add more of the characters' thoughts into it like one thing you said you loved about my writing is that I give what the characters are feeling but allow it to be interpreted as well by the reader. Maybe if you write slightly less about their actions and add a bit more about what they're feeling into it? Don't get me wrong, I still really enjoyed reading this, I'm just trying to give some feedback :) Sorry if none of this is making sense/is crap advice, I didn't promise to be good at any of this haha I am just so honoured that you'd want me to read your work and give my opinion. I always love getting your reviews and you seem like such a lovely person so thank-you for just reading my work and for every kind comment you make about my writing, each and every one makes me smile :) Hope you're well! Xx

Omg, that was so cute. :)

I loved it! Great job!

*applause* I loved it!((:

Aww this was awesome, cute and hot! But not too little and not too much it was the perfect balance of Kurt and Blaine! I could totally envision every moment. It was wrote in a KLAINE character style too so it's easily believable this could happen... Maybe not the steamy little tonguing at the end but because it's fanfic, I'd say, spot on, perfect! Loved the whole story and how it developed! :)

This was so adorable :) A lovely read!