A catheter does not go into your arm... It's for urinating... Basically.

I like this, and I enjoy the interactions between Shepard and Miranda. Please update

blaze it

It really is a shame that you stopped writing this fic..

I really like how this story develops, because John seems to becoming closer and closer to the man that you meet in the games, at least some of the time. And I especially appreciate how you make Miranda still frigid without being entirely unlikable, and how she's thawing out a bit in some areas but not in others. I really would love to be able to read some more.

Wtf dude ? I hate it when someone abandons their story without any explanation.

What happened to you man ?This is one of the most immersive stories I've read you'll continue,even tho it seems unlikely now.

really short chapter.

good chapter

I would love to see a update this story but is seems to have been dead for years.

I know it's been years but I really hope you will continue this story. And to be honest this story is one of the ¡best¡ I've ever read.! ;)

Shepard is amazing in this, there's no way I could be so fantastically well adjusted to the destruction of my life and death of my beloved family. It's interesting to see a character go from cheerful little family member to obvious sociopath in 9 chapters.

Great story, really hope you update it soon.

Regards Prince

Hey! Found this floating around in my favourites. Just wondering if you have plans to continue this and your other stories. It's an amazing fic! Would be a shame to see if left unfinished.

Loving the story... hating that it died...