It would be so cool if you wrote a sequel to this. It would have a lot of potential, especially it regards to the events in The Miracle Mask. This was an awesome story! As much as I love your one shots, you really should consider writing chartered fictions more often ;)

Aah, my feels. Look what you did to them!
This was amazing! It was so darn sad, then angsty, then nice, and just continued to make a mess of all my emotions. :)
It's good to have Dimitri (and his admittedly sexy voice) in a fic! It's just a shame that it will always hard for him and the professor to coexist in peace. I like them both so much. (and Claire of course!)
It was a really lovely story, if not a bit solemn (not a bad thing)! I love it nonetheless.
Now that you have set the challenge I am determined to read all of your PL fics! I'm getting closer now!

Thanks!
-Chai

This is a good story! I truly enjoyed it. I like the ClairexDimitri thing, though I like ClairexLayton, Dimitri's crush on Claire is kinda cute. I also like how you interpreted the events of the games without someof the main characters. I figured doing the Unwound Future would be hard, with the story revolving around the blast, Claire being gone, and Clive losing his parents. So none of that particular game happened, really. So, enough with my rambling, overall, great story, perfect interpretations, and now for a happy face:

:D

Hey great ending! Loved the whole story, it was very well thought out and it was awesome! Are you planning to write a sequel? If you are I'd love to read it :D

~Heidi

Yaaaaaay :D Happy ending! This was wonderful- thanks for writing it!

OHMILAYTON! Love it! :D Very sweet ending! *cries tears of joy* This is really great and I can't wait for the final chapter :D

~Heidi

OHMILAYTON this is amazing! :D I love it! It was sad that Hershel died, but this is really interesting to see what would have happened if things happened differently :D

~Heidi

I read the whole story...just right now ...took a couple of hours even being the fast reader I am... I am left speechless... All I can say is It was beautiful. And I noticed you mentioned Phoenix Wright, the spiky headed, blue suited, pink tied, lawyer. If it hadn't been 10 years, he would have gotten Claire and Dimitri acquitted. I love this story and you're an amazing author in this story alone.

OMFG, your story is just brilliant. Your ending, though I will always be LaytonxClaire, is fantastic and sadly beautiful _ You ended it on one short sentence, just like J. did with Deathly Hallows, which is always the best ending.

Truly, Well done :D

This has to be the very best AU story I've ever read.

Instant subscribing for future stories from me!

I loved the entire story you wrote. I would have loved it even more if Claire could have spoken to Layton again.

Wow you were able to summarized the entire first game in a chapter. The stuff is good! Its really easy to read and makes you want to read the next chapter, I really hope this story gets completed! Oh and I wonder if Luke will ever come into the story.

Omd this is amazing! I absolutley love the idea! Alsoo, unwouns should be interesting with no Legal, no Layton and Dimi and Claire solving it! Can't wait for the next chapters! Pplz update soon!

Chibi Allen xx

It's clever how you've got Dimitri and Claire solving the professor's previous mysteries- next is the Diabolical Box, I presume? And the part with Claire and Flora was really sweet! Haha Claire told off Don Poalo!

Wow, interesting story. Hope you finish it, but a lot of people don't understand that clive and Layton actually did travel to the future like Claire did. They just think they are ghost. Well Keep on writing

I don't enjoy the fact that you included the whole after-life thing, but I shall determine whether or not to continue reading based on further chapters. After all, it had such a wonderful start.

Anyway, what confuses me the most is that, if Layton was in the time machine, shouldn't he have been shot into the future like Claire was? Or do you have some reason to have left that out?