Reviews for Dancing Light
Crystalzap chapter 7 . 3/19/2019
lol "When was the first time you used magic around me?" -Well do you remember the first time we met? XD
Faeyre chapter 7 . 10/31/2018
Awww wish we could see Arthur’s reaction to that last line!
SunBinamra chapter 7 . 4/27/2018
While I do think Arthur was being unfair to Merlin, I think it was completely in character. Arthur is still learning to become the Once and Future King and the prat will always be there, no matter how he matures haha. This was a great fic, bravo!
CaitiAthena chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
... Arthur, please don't do anything stupid.
DracyGiuliana chapter 7 . 11/16/2015
This is wonderful! The wit, the style, the carefully placed drama! Serious, yet hilarious at the same time! I love it! :)
Guest chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
I think this is a good chapter. It explains what's going on. Not everything can be full of witty dialog and exciting battles.
Kyrstoon-Lagoon chapter 7 . 8/25/2015
AMAZING I LOVE IT YAY
EternalFire214 chapter 7 . 8/25/2015
I liked this! All the knight's reactions were exactly how I myself picture them. Very entertaining. :)
Guest chapter 7 . 6/24/2015
Love the ending, "so I'll be doing EXACTLY what I've been doing for the past four years" genius.
GallifreyanPal chapter 7 . 5/30/2015
I liked this story. A lot. I've always want to see a story JUST about Merlin revealing his magic OR it getting discovered. I know there are a lot out there, but none quite settle well with me. Yours is definitely one of the better ones out there.
Now for the part where I get nitpicky about your writing(I'm always like this, I give critiques xD)
First is your portrayal of Arthur. I have to say, it was great. If anything, he should have needed a little more persuasion to accept magic. You know Arthur, he's completely and unbelievably stubborn. It would have lengthened the story, but it would be better.
Second is the way that Merlin revealed his magic. I don't think he would have just blatantly shown Arthur that he had magic, I think he would have done a little explaining first. To ease Arthur into it. Explain the situation first.
But overall, I loved your story. It is VERY well-written, and I hope to read more of your works
Guest chapter 7 . 5/11/2015
I loved it! Thanks for writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
Beautiful reveal!
guardianofdragonlore chapter 7 . 10/25/2014
So...Official Court Sorcerer! Nice... but a bit of a mouthful...
red-racer-fan chapter 7 . 10/21/2014
Lol best ending ever XD
PrayerGirl chapter 7 . 7/10/2014
Cute!
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