'guys what would you say the date was', change to 'guys what would you say the date today was' cause i thought they already knew they were back in time and trying toguess the date then, so it was a bit confusing until i realized they were talking about that actual day

i always love rikki and zane's dialogue...:')

it says here lewis wants to train as a doctor and be a proper doctor to give them medical assistance without getting them exposed, but in the latest character profile it says he has qualifications as a nurse thats reserved for only when his family needs mer-help, could either one or the other be updated to match? i think qualifications as a doctor or nurse are two different things...(id go with the nurse, i think it suits the story better since he was never mentioned to have gone to med school in this story)

whos your favoriite couple? which ones your favorite to write?

Poor Jenny :( That sounds traumatic to go through, and koved the line wher ehe preferred to think of it as sampling one of their young instead of kidnapping children! xD Lovely chapter, cant wait to see what happens next!

Love this. One of my fav h2o fanfics

Oh no! Poor Jenny. This is going to be quite hectic, hehe. This seems to be weighing on Ryan's conscience. Wonder if that'll have any impact on future decisions? I'm looking forward to seeing how the McCartneys react to this. Worried parents are one of my favorite things, ha. ~ Mintstar

P.S. I don't know if this is weird to mention or not, but I noticed you've been enjoying simplesnowflake's The Next Unknown. I really like it too.

I always read the new chapters as soon as i get the notification, but as it seems I have forgotten to review the last couple of chapters. (oops )
Anyway i love how Katya is clear on the fact that the "subjects" are not getting harmed (in contrast to what other scientists intetested in Ryans work could have thought)
I can't wait to see what happens next!

I am so mad at Ryan after this chapter. I hope he does something in the end to redeem himself, but right now I'm kind of okay with just hating him and what he's doing. The fact that he realizes he's kidnapping, but is trying to make it sound better in his head makes my skin crawl.

The 'irony', I guess you could call it, of the mer-kid Ryan caught being Cleo's daughter isn't lost on me. All she was doing was testing out something she could do with her powers and that little thing is separating her from her friends who have no clue that she's in danger and not just ahead of them getting to the house.

I really hope that once Jenny's able to come to, she's able to get in touch with the others via mindspeak so they can figure out what's going on. Amazing chapter, and as always, I can't wait to see what's in store for it next.
-CrazyHayniac

Please write more.

Please write more. I can't wait to see what happens next

Great chapter

I read this when you first published it, then I completely forgot to review.

Amazing chapter, as always.

I loved that the kids all wanted to continue playing games together and hanging out. It shows that their friendships are strong much like their parents friendships.

While there was a lot of drama in this chapter, there was a little humor scattered throughout and I felt that it was a good mix to balance it out.

Their teamwork to stop the storm and protect their kids and home was really cool, although I have a feeling it will be attracting attention from the wrong people such as Ryan.
-CrazyHayniac

Great chapter! Bet Ryan will be interested in the strange weather heh.

Please write more.