Reviews for Dependence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hunny, words can't describe how much I loveddddd this fic! This is EXACTLY what I needed after finishing the series despite it not taking place in the 1500s lol. I'm gutted you didn't finish this but I still enjoyed it. I hope one day you revisit the site and finish it off. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you're probably not coming back to this story after it's been years, but I really really love it and it would mean the world to me if you did. It really well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see that's been a while since you've updated this but just reading this now and I really love it! I was wondering if you've thought of returning to it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really cool story. I love the modern changes to the dialouge and LxC's relationship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh please continue I love it ! |
![]() ![]() love this story please continue! I didn't watch till recently because I found the series on netflix. Obsessed wish there was a 4th season please finish this series. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter. Full of fluff. You write them well. It's effective to witness a memory of happiness just after her leaving to Europe. I like the references to the pilot. Her leaving without talking to him is extreme. It's been a long time I know but maybe one day you will continue this story? |
![]() ![]() You introduce new characters in an interesting way. Giuilia Farnese for example. I like the ball and all that happens here. Her departure to Europe is a good idea but it seems to happen way too quickly. One or two chapters would have been necessary to analyse it. |
![]() ![]() Really nice chapter. From Cesare's POV. Good interesting background to Rodrigo 's business , the family. Sweet moment when Lucrezia's head is on her brother's shoulder. |
![]() ![]() I like how you introduce the Sforzas. Not that big of a threat as it is only a date but it can be uneasy for Lucrezia. I like Cesare's anger and his promise to her. |
![]() ![]() I want to be comforted by Cesare too. You write him very well. Love his protectiveness. Lucrezia is quite different from the series , insecure. |
![]() ![]() Love the Borgia home life. |
![]() ![]() I like it a lot. Modernized yet faithful. Good intro ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope you're intending to continue on with this story at some point.. I love the way you've modernized it & the characterizations are so well done! Do continue, please! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this story, but when is the next Chapter coming? I need a conclusion! :) |