hey there! I love your story it's soo good! Just a note I honestly think this should be rated M. there's a lot of sex and violence that I think is too much for a T rating. but otherwise great story!

I know you probably wrote this a long time ago but I just discovered it. Excellent job!

Ok im just done with this tbh shes only gonna keep fucking him over and then your just probably gonna make it all his fault so she can continue to PLAY the little victim

Ok well i hate the way you made men seem like all they ever want is sex and that they don't do emotions thats fucked uo because its NOT true and SHE is the unemotional one and the only one playing with deekz feelings and heart not the other way round stop making it seem like that bitch is the victim.

Oh and I'm not sticking up for men cause im one because i am actually a female who doesn't like people trying to make men look like assholes so the stupid females can always act like the emotional one and the constant victim!

How could they let him live it down sleeping with kensi but not touching her? Uh maybe because his a gentleman and wouldn't do something she didn't want you make it sound like they would of romanticly touched her wether she wanted it or not

KENSI IS PATHETIC!

Is it impossible for deeks to get any real focus without kensi being there i didn't realise how hard it would be to find a deeks focused story who knew everyone was only fans of stupid kensi.

Done with ncis la

Ugh so done with this ncis la fanfics always end up about her and her getting main focus and her getting hurt in some way

Stupid.

absolutly loved this story this has to be one of my favorite:)

Loved this!

Loved it! Thank you!

what the hell is sledging?

Reallllllly great end to a really great story.

Haha good chapter