Please continue this Story. It's realy good.

Ooh, I must admit at first I thought it a little weird for lightning and Odin...but I read through it anyway and wow. Good fic: well-written, descriptive and cheeky :P

You should write more lightning (and smow) fics.

That was really good. I would say it could have used a more graphic sex scene but it was better this way.

BEST STORY EVER! :D

Beautifully done. One could just feel the depression Lightning was going through, how Odin was just her only ray of hope. Thank you for this piece.

As always, you cease to amaze with you writings. ;D I like the way you portrayed Lightning's determination and sorrow. As well as her eidolon. Very characterized and unique 8D

Thanks for another great fic!

~Asylum