When will you update next? It was getting good.

when are you going to update its been 2 years

Great story!

Please update friend

I read the ten chapters in one go and saw a good improvement in grammar. It still does need improvement. The plot is good though. however, the grammar doesn't make the story flow nicely. There were times I got confused because of the grammar, but I still understand for the most part. With that said, did Nate leave or is he still there? From what I read, was she shooing Nate to leave or other things. The side plot with Nate seems unexplored and unnecessary, but you must have your reasons.

Good plot, but lacking proper grammar. Still, go on.

Sorry i had to go and i forgot to finish that last review before i sent it in i wanted to say that scene with nico pedro and the two new birds is on deviantart

Thats pretty funny with whats going on in rio

Oh and by the way its on the scene with nico,pedro,and those two girl birds

Halarious chapter ..jewel is still trying to get blu into a sticky situation if you know what I meanX)till next time

really luv this chapter looks like nico and pedro r getting busy in rio

nice chapter bro."time to get to work soilder"hahaha man that was just pricless :P

Continue

Please continue

Love ur new chapter man wish u luck

Great story dude.i wonder what kind of plan blu will do to embarras nate lol:P i know u read this alot but...update soon:D

Good job man!:D