great story

Woah!
Amazing x

I know Oliver is meant to be Cromwell, but I sooooooooooooooo prefer your version!

Beautiful chapter! :) x

Oo, nice ending!

Aw! Just so darn cute!

Brave Myrnin :)
Also adorable, intelligent, amazing, irresistible Myrnin!

Great story! X

Extremely promising start!

Through darling not thru. Thru is how Mc Donald's spells it. ;]

i really liked this story ... i hope you write more story's in the future as you have a talent for writing :) c.c.b.b

i love the ending to this chapter its soooo romantic X3 c.c.b.b

just saying but its through ... but that doesn't change my appreciation of the story c.c.b.b

remember the correct punctuation and minor spelling mistakes other than that i think its a good story XP c.c.b.b

OH GOD YOU KILLED MICHAEL!

Here is the second part of my HUGE review... Xxx

Chapter 27- Okay... you know that the Glass House doesn't welcome guests anymore, right? Myrnin kind of killed it when saving Claire... it is just an old house now... :(

Chapter 28- They do have some kind of addiction to sex, and Myrnin enjoys probing Claire with his fingers too much... and Claire just... enjoys touching Myrnin too much.

Maybe they should calm it down a bit? Just a little bit? Atleast, they should until Eve has had the baby, and Amelie is better! She WILL get better.

I love how Myrnin is becoming more human! It is really sweet...

Now... on with the next chapter if it doesn't trouble you! :P

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Chapter 29- Brotherhood of Vampires? Ooohh... could this be going somewhere for dear Ollie-pop?

I hope so... he is a brilliant character, and needs to be used more. His potential as a character is underestimated by many, though he can be hard to incorporate. I hope this is a start of something including him a lot! Xxx

Chapter 30 & 31- POOR OLIVER! That is so sad! I think that the ages are a tad wrong... Amelie is... I think 1496 years old... and Oliver is only a couple of hundred years younger than her... but oh well, we are writing here, not manipulating algebra or something... depsite the fact I love algebra... :/

Next chapter if it doesn't bother you... XD

Chapter 32- They are officially addicted to sex. Ute, this isn't even funny anymore! Or is it you... OMG! You are addicted to sex! *shudders*

HAHAHAHAHA! Joking, honest!

Chapter 33- THEO GOLDMAN! I did not see that coming. At all. He is loyal to Amelie, and always will be! But that is Rachel Caine's Theo Goldman... this is yours. Your Theo Goldman! AN EVIL THEO GOLDMAN?

*gasps*

Must read on... forgive me for my reviewing laziness... :/

Chapter 34- I HATE YOU! YOU KILLED AMELIE! UNLESS SHE SURVIVES! I forgive you because you have writers freedom... but still. I hate you! Even if the baby made it! I must go and read... short review as revenge. :P hehe x

Chapter 35- AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! ROMANTIC DECLARATION! SWEETEST THING EVER! AND AMELIE ISN'T DEAD! AND NOR IS OLIVER! AND THE BABY LOOKS LIKE SAM, AND WILL BE NAMED AFTER HIM! I am completely happy now. All that needs to happen is Amelie have a kid with Oliver, and Claire and Myrnin have a kid... then this story and my life shall be complete!

Chapter 36- :'( It has finished! I quite liked the ending, but I am disappointed that Amelie AND Oliver had to die... I was surprised they didn't get changed again... I love the hybrid thing, that works amazingly well!

Can't wait for the new story! You will have to tell me a bit more about it... I shall pump you for information! Love youuu, and thankyou for letting me read such an amazing story, I feel privileged! Xxx

I wrote all my thoughts down, and decided to put them as a big review on the last chapter! Hope you don't mind! And sorry they aren't as long as my normal ones are... I wasn't allowed to have them ALL that long, in the same review... so I cut them down to size... X

Chapter 1- MAGNUS MIGHT BE KILLED! AND YOU MIGHT SAVE AMELIE! You had better save Amelie... or I might just have to kill you. Painfully... fair warning. You have read my reviews on other stories. ALLL those threats go to you. Not just one. ALL of them. So... you had better save Amelie. Comprende? And unless we are just weird over here in England, I could have sworn through is spelt 'through'... not 'thru'... might just be me being English... sorry if it is! :/ Love it so far, and extremely glad I don't have to wait for an update!

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Chapter 2- Oh Myrnin... Myrnin, Myrnin, Myrnin... I can see you doing it... but I am not sure if I like what I see... at all for that matter... And... KILL SHANE! I hate Shane... he is a slacker... complete, utter slacker... *huffs* Myrnin should have Claire, considering I can't... Damn me being real and not fictional!

I don't see any Amelie improvements... which concerns me... mainly for her, but also for you... I had better see an improvement soon...

I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT FOR AN UPDATE! !

Couple of mistakes, but nothing too bad... they can all be sorted out when/if you do an edit!

Chapter 3- YAYYYY! Amelie is actually conscious! And talking! And actually ALIVE! And, yayayayayayayayyayay, Michael and Eve can get married! That makes me really happy! They are meant to be together, without doubt!

Myrnin will probably be the best out of the three of them, maybe a bit below Oliver. I am actually quite concerned about Michael doing it... He will try his best, but he isn't as skilled as Myrnin or Oliver... and he is extremely young. I am starting to fear for his life... DON'T KILL MICHAEL! I would rather you saved Amelie, BUT I STILL DON'T WANT YOU TO KILL MICHAEL! THAT WILL MAKE ME ANGRY! AND YOU DON'T WANT TO SEE MY WHEN I AM ANGRY... I say things. Rather unpleasant things... God... i sound like a psycho... PERFECT IMMITATION OF MYSELF! *joking... honest.

Few mistakes, but nothing too major!

Next chapter, here I come... *wiggles eyebrows seductively*

Chapter 4- CLIFFFHANGERRR! Short review, for I MUST read the next chapter...

Never been too keen on Claire, so kill her if necessary... she annoys me, just like Bella does... but Bella is FAR worse... she just wines about how awful her life is, despite the fact she has A LOT of hot guys around her... strange girl.

I think there were quite a few mistakes in this chappy, but they can be sorted... I am probably a hypocrite. I probably just wrote a load of stuff, contradicting everything I have ever written as a FF... sorry... :/

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Chapter 5- I don't care if I hate Shane... THAT WAS EVIL OF YOU! HE DIEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD! BUT THEN AGAIN... I am contradicting myself... And this is when my mouth closes...

Very good... it all happened a bit fast for me though... I would have preferred it if you went into a bit more detail, but the general plot... A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! I really need to get a new word to spell out... How about... I don't know... I shall think of one, don't worry!

And this is now your chance to get Claire and Myrnin together... do it. Or pain shall come your way... And this is also where you tell me that Amelie has made a full recovery as Magnus is dead. He died, along side all his DNA...

Waiting... waiting... the next chapter will tell me...BRB... must read chapter...

Chapter 6- Phewww... I thought he had come back then... when he died I mourned for a few seconds, but now I can live... Stop the mourning Claire, and be with the man that is right for you! MYRNIN! Though he would be better off with me... *hmmpph*

Sorry... this bit is short... I want the next chapter!

Chapter 7- See... sleeping in Myrnin's 'cot'... MYRNIN, GET A BED! NO MATTER HOW SIMILAR OUR ROOMS MAY BE, I ACTUALLY HAVE A BED!... Start of a relationship... I can see it brewing...

Nightmares... If Magnus comes back... Murder... Not just pain that shall be inflicted on you... I will just kill you... simple as. -_-

Chapter 8- Awww... :') So that is why I am going to live! To experience love. That was so sweet! But... Myrnin commando... is a bit... YUMMY!

Who said that? That was so immature... :/

Now... I am still dreading Magnus' arrival... But if you know what is good for you, you will not have! Off to next chapter... byeee! x

Chapter 9- I can't stop laughing! Shit... I just woke my baby up! Bugger it... Oh well... Work out video? Ute... you are far too funny for your own good...

Must run and hide from the angry mother, who has to deal with the baby... :/

Sorry... another short part... next will be longer! :P

Chapter 10 & 11- I am becoming lazy... Or your writing is too good, and is making me want to read on! It is your fault your reviews are so small! I am having to cut them down anyway, so they will actually fit when I enter them, so sorry! Xxx P.S- Jesus! Claire and Myrnin are at it like rabbits! Is sex really that addictive? Ute. Don't answer that question. Ever. I fear the answer, as I know you will be honest. *shudders*

Chapter 12- I want them to have kids! LET THEM HAVE KIDS! *squeals* Minny EveMichael's and minny Clyrnin's! Must sleep... will get caught in the act of reading at 1:00am, and my laptop will be banned for ages... and then I won't be able to talk to you or read! Trust me... in the long run, it makes sense... x And crap. Next chapter is 13... unlucky number... :/

Chapter 13- Nothing bad happened? I can't believe it! I want to read. But...must... review... It was brill! And... you have managed to make me miss Shane... and I hate Shane. Hate him. With a passion.

But I am loving Claire with Myrnin, no matter how jealous I feel... I just imagine myself as her... XD

On to the next chapter! WAHOO!

Chapter 14- I hate you Ute. How could you? MYRNIN IS NOW DEAD, AND INHABITED BY MAGNUS! This review is short, in a form of revenge. I can't believe you would be so mean! :'(

Oh well... I have to forgive you! :* Hehe x

Unless it was just a dream and it didn't actually happen. I know it was a dream, but I am not sure if it actually happened or not... brb... am gonna go and find out!

Chapter 15- Ummm... opperandum? Pretty sure that isn't a word... that isn't a word, is it? Why am I asking a German? Sorry... :/

Aww... they are perfect here! Rachel Caine had better have read this, and taken example. She had BETTER. Or else. I have her email. She will be hearing from me. A lot.

Chapter 16- ARGGHHH! Okay. Ute. No matter what you have done for me, if you kill Myrnin, I will never speak to you again, and I will stop reading your fics. He can not die. Ever. He just can't.

I hope Amelie goes back to herself, and we start hearing more of her. I don't like her being this close to Eve, I would prefer it if if were like that with Amelie and Claire. I don't know why... it just feels morally wrong for them to be so close, especially with the drastic change in personality. Next chapter... remember, even though it has already been written. No. Killing. Of. Myrnin.

Or you die. And I stop talking to you... :L

Chapter 17- Ghost Busters? 'Suck Magnus up?' WHAT THE HELL? This is extremely cheesy, but very funny. Very funny indeed. Yet you made it work... this is going to be funny to see... NO KILLING OF THE MYRNIN, OR UTE SHALL BE HURT. Just saying.

Okay, I may be like this when I am older, but I am not now, so let me say this. THEY ARE OVERLY ADDICTED TO SEX, AND IT IS FREAKING ME OUT. STOP HAVING SEX.

Myrnin is about to go crazy and bite Claire! Oh no!

And I must tell you something. PuPils. With a 'P'. I normally don't penalise you, but this is a big deal. It sounds to close to pubes... and... there is a big difference. Watch out! Trololol...

*wipes forehead* He didn't drain her! THANK GOD! Next chapter if you don't mind...

Chapter 18- Distraction... haha. Don't get Oliver killed either. I LIKE HIM, AND AMELIE NEEDS A LOVER WHEN SHE GETS BETTER! Yes, 'WHEN', not if, when. Remember. She is going to get better. She isn't going to die! Exciting... next chappy if ya don't mind...

Chapter 19- MYRNIN DIDN'T DIE! NO ONE DID THANK UTE! Except for Magnus... but... YOU GET WHAT I MEAN! Hehehehehehehe... ;)

It was brill! A bit rushed, but still... extremely brill!

Next chapter now... please?

Yes... I am doing it... sorry... :/

Chapter 20- Okay... you have made a fatal error... Romeo and JULIET! THAT IS ONE THING I REALLY CAN'T FORGIVE! I am starting to like Amelie and Eve's relationship, yet I would like to see it in a bit more detail, like know what Amelie said to her etc...

But it is already written, so I will have to go and see... right now. :/

HAng on a second... not done. a BOMB? WHAT THE HELL? ARE YOU INSANE! You will die at my own hands one day. I am going to kill you Ute. Kill you.

Chapter 21- You. Killed. Michael. Forget authors freedom. You. Killed. Michael. Ute. You. Shall. Die.

Amelie said it herself! She swore to it actually!

Watch out... She is coming...

Chapter 22- They have an addiction to sex... I believe it is called hypersexuality... They need to see a therapist... badly... going to have a shower... give me 20 mins! Xxx

Chapter 23 & 24- I kind of thought that Eve would still be able to have the baby! I honestly did, I just didn't think it was a plausable theory... like... at all. So I didn't say anything... But, YAY! A MINI MICHAEL!

Next chappy... back in a mo! Xx

Chapter 25 & 26- I am... PREGNANT WITH A VAMPIRIC CHILD!

My review was too long, so I