Reviews for We have a Situation, Hotch
ambernz chapter 10 . 6/26
Not sure if you still write, but great story so far, would love to read another chapter
TobiasHankel chapter 10 . 1/23
I can't believe this was written by someone so young. Thank you for wrapping it up, even if it wasn't the full ending you wanted. Way better then being left hanging.
bigtimedreamer101 chapter 10 . 9/18/2016
I am just glad that you ended the story. Most people would leave it to rot but you made an effort, a good one too, to end the story after leaving it alone for a while!
Brinohms chapter 4 . 9/13/2016
" Spencer LAY on the bed. He did not lied on the bed. Get your verbs correct. It matters.
BookzareLyfe34 chapter 3 . 4/23/2016
the black man? really
A chapter 5 . 4/14/2016
Only problem I have with this chapter is how the guy just disappears.. Another way you could've done that is by having someone deliver the box for him or having it shipped to the precinct. Otherwise I like the plot and I think you're doing an alright job, especially compared to other authors tackling subject matter like this. My favorite parts are the Spencer scenes as they're more thought out. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/9/2015
have u thought about how thoroughly fucked up we are, we enjoy reading this stuff, i mean the story great but life is so messed up... poor spence
Johnlockforthewin chapter 10 . 12/18/2014
Hey, don't get discouraged. I really like this story.
annadriya chapter 10 . 8/4/2014
goog story!
madison chapter 4 . 5/19/2014
the baby of their team... i LOVE it
iheartfurry17 chapter 10 . 5/14/2014
Omg this was real good when will u updata i hope its soon i like read this all in like 1 hour...it was that good i would not stop
Love Of Blood chapter 10 . 4/23/2014
While at Ihop, Spencer so fall asleep during breakfast which causes Hotch to worry about him?

Question if Reid has developed malnutrion should he of struggled to eat his dinner? Why didn't he struggle to eat his dinner?

Later on in one of your chapters you should have Spencer not be able to eat at all which causes Hotch to worry about him.

Please keep on writing I love your story so far and I would love to read more. Please and thank you.
s chapter 10 . 10/29/2013
Hey you have done a great job here. Sorry real life has gotten in the way of continuing -how inconsiderate of it! If you do come back, it would be great if you could include some of the signs of dissociation, all the ways that the mind tries to run from the pain. Anyway, thanks.
664320904363965-574760 chapter 6 . 10/1/2013
Note - Mark was his middle name.
happy face chapter 10 . 8/5/2013
Can you update soon? I really want to read more please
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