Reviews for When a Veela Cries
x102reddragon chapter 28 . 7/19
So is Gabby more powerful then Fleur now? You seemed to imply it, but am not sure. Glad to see we are getting close to the climax. Look forward to seeing Harry and Fleur reunite even if something tells me it won’t be super happy. Can’t wait to see you finish this.
Marcus chapter 2 . 7/19
Okay, i get you wanted to get rid of the "side" characters, but what you came up with is just lazy. As if a group of Death Eaters could beat Dumbledore, let alone the mass of people. The same Death Eathers that had to give their all against children in Book 5
Deehan Haq chapter 28 . 7/19
Despite what other reviews had told me at the beginning of this story, this story is actually pretty well written. It's mature as it probably ever gets, and I guess I get why the people who died, needed to die. People reading this may feel denial but, hey, it's exactly how wars are. I love this story and really, really hope that you haven’t decided to abandon it in the last 2 years. I really want to read through to the end...
Guest chapter 28 . 5/20
Just, I'd like to live long enough to see the end.
BamBangBoom chapter 1 . 5/3
I liked the story alright. It's a bit ridiculous with the character death(some seem to be thrown in for no reason other than just because), relationship was a bit miss with how the story is, and I'm really not much of a fan of Fleur to be honest. I think the story would be a decent bit better if you rewrote the first twelve-ish chapters.
princess2019 chapter 28 . 4/27
more please
trixiefan83 chapter 28 . 4/25
I like this story but why so many to die. Not just Hogwarts, but both Marcus and Markus. Bloodthirsty? Is there a purpose? Did Harry have to lose Sirius and Remus? Just anout every single person important to him? And I know you said you'd continue to update and things would be slow but 2 years? As i said it's a good story. I'd like to see more soon please
deathlyhallow0 chapter 28 . 4/18
You said slow but i didn't think it would be this slow...
J Linsmeyer chapter 28 . 4/4
I keep coming back to this story, praying it gets updated. The story is so good and so original. I really hope you will finish it someday.
TheDarkMan19 chapter 4 . 3/4
Sorry im out. It was interesting up until the weird and incredibly stupid “lesson” on girls. I get that Harry isn’t a social genius, but girls aren’t some strange different species who must be learned about through careful study. They’re just people.
That2-one3-girl4 chapter 2 . 2/29
Something that doesn't make sense:

How the fick did the Hogwarts wards come down? Like only a 30ish death eaters who were just broken out of askaban were able to kill so many? And how the fuck did Harry even? I don't understand. A lot of it doesn't make sense. Sorry but no.
Bye.
datbenik513 chapter 28 . 2/3
This is, as I may or may not have expressed before, THE lexicon on Veela society, mythology and the like. And, as such, I am immensely enjoying every read and re-read. Please, please, do NOT abandon it.
Ben Walker1 chapter 1 . 1/17
if you ever come back to this, please replace the drama tag with angst. this story is filled with it and I'd much rather it correctly be filtered OUT when I look for fics to read.
Erielaw chapter 28 . 12/22/2019
Magnificent work. So close to a conclusion, too.
kellen23 chapter 28 . 12/12/2019
Really hope you get back to this. It deserves a good ensing
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