This whole fic is f*cking awesome. You rock

I love how you capture Nate and Sully's relationship

Sweet story, I was just going to favourite it until I saw your 'silent ninja' comment :) Thank you for posting

This is brilliant, I love their thought processes

I love how you've written this, how you've portrayed Sully's protectiveness for Nate. It's perfect

Perfect! Loved that scene in U3, knowing that Sully would literally do ANYTHING to save Nate's life, even if it meant killing Charlie.

Man, I loved this story to pieces. Please this with more of the good scene would be when Elena asked him not to take Sully to the end of the Earth. There are so many in the third game of slashy goodness. Please continue with some more. I am starving for fics for this pairing and very few people can keep in character like you.

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I'm a bit late in reviewing. I've read this story almost 10 times now and each time it just gets better. I love the way that you've shown Nate and Sully's father/son relationship.
Because of this story I went and made a music video on youtube for Nathan and Sully. I would like to say that you were a major inspiration in this and thanks a lot for writing such an awesome story!
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LOOK HERE, YOU

You're not allowed to write any more of this thing, okay

I only have so many feels in my soul and YOU'VE TAKEN MOST OF THEM

Yeah so basically you get a big hug and KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK but, you know, if I don't review again it's probably because my heart broke. IN THE GOOD WAY.

Lol, ok. I'll review because of the silent ninja readers comment xD I like your story a lot. The interaction and thoughts are very believable between the characters. So, good job! -

It's cool, I was having a go at you, just pointing out in a kind bubbly way (the same way you'd say, 'You have loads of friends!') that Sully has Elena too (and she isn't 'direct' like Nate, i.e a son, like you said. She's the wife (never blood related to their new Father-In-Law), so she is completly family but not in the same way as Nate) and we saw that Cargo Plane plan. She'd go just as far for Sully as Nate would, which could be a very cool chapter, Nate and Elena talking about Sully and the rescue. We should have had more talk betwen other characters on the relationship. 'Cause Sully really is a Father-In-Law to Elena; he almost forces Nate to get back with her, helping her down those stairs when she was wounded (and that little hand slap Elena gave if you look closly), it's all cool bits.

Not having ago, just being happy informant, and oh yeah, this chapter was good. I hate those Ninja readers. Reviews do make all the difference.

Yeah, more Elena to Sully to Nate would be badass. That family is not really explored is it? It's either Nate/Elena or Nate/Sully, or rarely Elena/Sully.

What about Nate/Elena/Sully? Yeah, so that would be an awesome way to go for an added bit if you feel like it!

Anyway, I'd love to see a little Elena.

Kudos to your story.

i like how you switched between their thoughts. i'm lovin this

Really love this! This is one of my favorite chapters in the game, the Nate/Sully Father/Son relationship is also my favorite! XD There aren't enough of them on here ) Hope you update soon!

lovelovelove this! really interested to see where this is going- you have the whole nate/sully father/son dynamic down really well! hope you decide to write more - would love to see some of your own scenarios thrown into the mix (although i love your interpretations of in-game scenes too!) cant wait to read more! ;-)